Absolutely wonderful conclusion, thank you so much for writing. Everything about the Flower Trio's section was perfect and hit my kinks and pacing and teasing preferences in such an amazing way. Caramel is particularly hot, being the fuckable, slightly sleazy but somehow following through self-indulgent Master stud-muffin that he is.

The timeskip was pretty unexpected, in a great way, and I had no idea that I'd enjoy some of the imagery and scenes you conveyed with it until they were happening. Hot, though. It did start to make me wonder if you were leading up to some conspiratorial explanation or twist ending or something, but I think it's honestly hotter that all the dumb porn genre shifting just happens and there's no explanation for everypony's character change besides 'breeding be like that'. Why didn't it happen any earlier? Not a worthwhile question, and that's hot.

Twilight and Spike was hot and good, but Twilight and Shining was really fucking great, and you did a good job of making him feel very overbearingly attractive, in a way I really enjoy. And Spike and Cadance being complicitly manipulative about it is hotttttt

Above all else (maybe? hard to pick out my favorite aspects), I just really enjoy the shameless playful nature you've really developed. The non-sequitur with the Narrator fucking the heck out of Pinkie just for the sake of it was hot and silly, even if it feels like it tied into nothing else here, and could have been removed without changing the appreciation of everything else — it feels like any "good" writer would tell you it shouldn't be there, but it's fun. Even the thing with the dragonballs being just a really low hanging pun (snicker) you wanted to make, made me groan but still felt like such a reminder you're just writing to have fun and not take it seriously. I really, really appreciated it all, thank you.

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You're quite welcome, and your intuition is spot on...for I did consider making it all one BIG conspiracy, with Celestia pulling the strings behind the scenes in order to increase the population, starting with Ponyville, and then, depending on the success, moving from city to city.

But then I thought...NAAAHHH, just make it one big, sexy, silly, porn romp, with no cloak-and-dagger innuendos or hidden messages; just a bunch o' bimbos gittin' riggity riggity WRECKED!

Thanks for reading, and thank you for your input! I'm glad I was able to entertain you and others, and I hope to keep improving!

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This was very nice!! I cannot wait to see what else you do!!

What a crazy ending! It felt like you were throwing everything you could think of into the story... NOT a bad thing by any means! I thought Derpy’s lipstick tease at the town meeting was especially hot... not to mention her “performance review” later in the chapter, Twilight listening in on Rarity, and so much more!

But be careful with that fourth wall, my dude. You never know what... or who... might be lurking behind it!

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I simply LUV messin' with Derpy, as she has an innocence and naiveté that is so exploitable, yet, as you can see, I take pains to make sure she's a willing participant in the "fun!" Give her a set of HUGE knockers, a sweet, bubble ass, and make her semi-allergic to clothing, and you have a guy's plaything! Woo HOO!!

And yeah, for this conclusion I was in a silly mood and just threw everything I could think of at it, hence the length. The Side Story with Button and his MILF Mom was actually part of this chapter, but at the last minute (a few weeks ago, actually) I took it out and made it its own story.

As far as that Fourth Wall? If there's busty mares waiting behind it, I'll take my chances!

Thanks for reading, and as always, thank you for commenting!