Epilogue
“I’ve had these strange recollections since before I started my cult. It’s… blurry. I can't recall the dreams once I wake up, but I remembered one day when Double Diamond checked up on me, because apparently I sobbed very loudly in my sleep, and afterwards I...”
“Go on.”
“Gather all of my victims… and I’d erase their memories of the past twenty-four hours.”
“Why in Tartarus would you do that?”
“I… I’m not sure. It was a habit I had, as if a voice was screaming inside my head, and if I didn’t listen to it I’d feel… depressed. Isn’t that strange?”
“Sure is! But I’m not sure why you’re coming to me for it. I’m not a therapist, but if you let me out of my cage, I’m sure I’d be swell at it.”
“I came to you because we did some digging in your room, and we found a note of your muffin recipe in your school binder.”
“You have no value for privacy, Starlight. You’re no better than Luna. Also, they’re cupcakes, not muffins.”
“Yeah, well, I thought that recipe looked familiar, so I went to Sugar Belle and it was identical to the one that, apparently, I gave her when I indoctrinated her into my cult.”
“How do they sell?”
“Like hotcakes.”
“You’re bumming me out. Y’know, I can’t tell if it’s day or night in Tartarus. And you’ve left me in a cage too small to fly. It’s not healthy for a pegasus filly, but I know you don’t care.”
“I do care, even if you tried to banish me and all of magic to a void. Honestly, I… I might be the only one that cares.”
“Y’know, if Discord or Twilight tried to drain all of magic, you wouldn’t even have given them community service.”
“I doubt that.”
“Also, if you had failed to escape Twilight when she freed your pathetic village all those moons ago, you’d be sharing Tartarus in your very own cage. I know you’d be an awful roommate, though. Crying and begging. How is any of this fair?”
“I’m trying my best, Cozy, but it’s a bit harder to convince the Sisters. Discord took a thousand years, but I know you don’t have that long. And even then, with Discord, Twilight was reluctant. And I had to literally show her my past before she knew how to help me, but once she did, she really shows you why she’s the Princess of Friendship.”
“Sure. Of course.”
“Otherwise, maybe if Discord hadn’t eaten those reformation spells…”
“Hah! As if that'll work. My cutie mark is more powerful that a some flashy spell!”
“Cutie marks can mean different things… And anyways, we’re not exactly sure what there is to teach you. You sorta know everything there is to know about Friendship.”
“Mhm!”
“…I’ve done some research, or actually, I tried to dabble in a bit of hypnotherapy but only got a few snippets and… have you ever heard of the sitcom, ‘Love that Foal?’ It’s a bit old, but the main character looks a bit like you.”
“I’m not her. She’s dead. I’m a real filly, Ms. Glimmer… but if you have to know, I have a few episodes memorized up in here. I’d be glad if you brought me a portable TV set or anything else to do in Tartarus besides talk to a grumpy centaur or take care of your dog. Luna, you’re such a terrible pet owner!”
“It’s kinda funny…”
“What is?”
“That’s my favorite show.”
“…Golly. Okay. You’re even nuttier than I thought. This conversation is over!”
“Cozy! Wait—”
The distance between us grew as the darkness enveloped her world, and I was pulled back into a portal.
“Dost thou bear any positive developments?” Luna asked.
“She admitted to a few things but isn’t exactly ready to apologize. I mean, I didn’t ask but…”
“I wouldn’t bother. I've peered into her dreams once or twice before, until she noticed my presence. Through means I’ve yet to fully discover, she banished me from her mind. The nerve!”
“You think maybe she’ll be a bit more agreeable if you made her a cage a bit bigger or maybe leave her a book or two?”
“We sent that rogue back to whence she came! If she wishes to usurp our throne we hold the right as the defenders of Equestria and her Harmony to deal her a punishment befitting for a fallen Princess. Perhaps if maturity provides her a morsel of inhibition, we'll reevaluate our position in a century or two.”
“It’s difficult to reform somepony when you don’t even know who their mother is.”
“…You're kidding, right?”
“Wait, what?”
“Huh. I honestly expected you to break down about now, but if she never told... perhaps she does care about you… perhaps... there's a bit of good in that filly... arguable whether it's a workable amount, but—”
“What are you talking about?”
“Hm? Oh, uhm… Oh my! Seems that a cloud has wandered overhead! The astral link is severing! Ahhhh!”
“…”
“Gheaahh!” I was awoken by a blood-curdling scream, by none other than a certain magician.
“Starlight! Trixie had the most terrifying, abrupt, horrific nightmare! I dreamt that Cozy Glow had succeeded in her plans to drain all of the magic from Equestria!”
“And that I’d be floating in an endless abyss?”
“Well, of course, that too, and also Cozy would ask me to perform for her, but Trixie wouldn’t be able to use any of her real magic in her stage magic shows!”
“…You should really call your mom sometimes.”
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This is a bad cliffhanger and a bad ending.
Well, that was depressing. Poor Cozy, doomed to not get the help she needs just like in the show because Starlight was a horrible pony who was just as evil as any other unreformed villain. The ending was pretty abrupt though. I'm not sure if that part with Luna and the astral link was just a dream or that they were actually telepathically communicating.
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Seriously? Starlight actually wanted to help ponies. True, she didn't go about it in the right way, but her goal of "equality" was intended to help Equestria.
How does that make her as evil as the likes of Sombra, who wanted to brainwash ponies into his mindless slaves, or Tirek, who wanted to take all magic from Equestria?
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I don't see how it's a cliffhanger. It's an origin story and she's in Tartarus so season 9 happens next.
11671424
I have a draft of a story where Cozy and Flurry argue over whether to see Barbie or Oppenheimer. Luster is there too on her Switch. You think I should finish it? After a new chapter of DA, of course.
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Starlight was a crazy selfish mare who wanted others to change to satiate HER perfect worldview. In this story, she deliberately ignored what her daughter wanted and was willing to put up with the clear health risks of removing her cutie mark because she wanted her to be exactly like she wanted. That is evil on its own.
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Of course! It would make for a fun story. You're a great writer.
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She may have been selfish, but she wasn't even close to being as bad as the likes of Sombra or Tirek, or even the Storm King. None of them even pretended to have good intentions. They openly attacked and tried to conquer Equestria. The same cannot be said of Starlight.
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I hesitate to point this out, because I'm not convinced it's representative of the cannon show, but in the story at least it's pretty clear that Cozy Glow is pretty twisted.
Now whether that was always her nature or not I can't say, but Starlight had some emotionally driven reasons for assuming it was the fault of her Cutie Mark.
Cozy nearly gets those fillies killed and I'm not at all convinced that wasn't the intent. You can argue that it's revenge or something like that for causing her to get in trouble, but it's still definitely overkill.
It still doesn't excuse reforming Discord over her, but it does explain why Starlight tries to remove her mark, even if she clearly gave up on Cozy in the end.
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Changed 'giggle' to 'jiggle', thanks for the correction! I don't think fetters is wrong though. I meant those chains that prisoners wear, cutie mark = imprisonment to fate, at least to Markist Starlight. Also good job on getting the Baby Doll reference.
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Baby Doll is one of my favorite characters from BTAS. I've always thought she and Cozy Glow would make for an interesting team up.
Nice Origin Story
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Thanks