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AndyHunter


I'm not the DJ or the guy from EastEnders. I am the brony, skater and the fanfic character one.

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Windy, tired of stallions, tries something different, not only with another female, but also with a different species, this doesn't matter to her, as long as she is with the Kirin she loves so much.
Both are the happiest couple in Equestria, inseparable and their lives will change forever.

This story takes place weeks later Season 8 Episode 23 Sounds of silence

Note: No Kirin X Milf fics yet? Don´t worry, I'm here to solve that problem, thank me later. :rainbowdetermined2:

Besides Windy and Autumn deserve more love, that's why I made this fic, plus they're one of my favorite couples, even though they haven't even seen each other on the show. That's what fics are for, right?

And the covert art was made by myself. I didn't commission a child, for real :rainbowlaugh:

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Comments ( 18 )

So does this mean that Rainbow Dash never gets born in this story?

11660042
Rainbow IS born, this story takes place weeks after episode 23 season 8

Why would Bow leave Windy after years of marriage?

11660130
Because Windy is already old and not as pretty as before, that makes Bow lose interest in her.

11660179
Eh… That’s pretty absurd, but thanks to the benefit of suspense of disbelief, I’ll overlook it.

Granted, he should also be old, too. To the point that Windy also doesn’t like him.

11660184
I always thought she would be one of the ones who would age like wine anyways

11660186
Yeah. Precisely.

11660184
I tried my best to do a backstory about the reasons why Bow leaves her, I didn't want to go so directly, about Windy and Autumnn meeting and becoming a couple just in the first chapter. They are all characters that we know nothing about, not their ages, we don't even know if they are married or not. I think I should have put that Bow was just a womanizer and that's it, I think it makes more sense that way.

11660194
Now THAT is much better. Him being a cheat/womanizer flows so much better with the story’s context.

11660195
Do you think that if I add cheating themes, I have to crasify the story as T? I wanted the story to be for E, I try hard to avoid sexual themes as much as I could.

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Yeah. If you add such themes, it definitely goes up to a T.

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Oh, well, it doesn't matter, I wanted it to be accessible to everyone, but if I have to give it another classification, it will be worth it, what matters most to me is the quality of my stories, although I must admit that this time I screwed up.
I'm going to fix it and post an apology blog when I'm done editing.

11660186
I thought that too, but Bow in this case, doesn't see it that way. When I was thinking about the reasons why Bow would leave her, 2 ways came to my mind while I was writing.

1 That Bow simply abandoned Windy out of lack of interest, trying to explain it would be very complicated, what reason could it be? He abandon her because yeah, why not? It would be a very weak reason, I discarded that idea immediately.

2 That bow is in a relationship with a younger mare. reason? Windy is old and not as attractive to him anymore, the only reason Bow was in love with her. Also, in the story, it becomes clear, that he manipulated her, in such a way that he can do the same with other mares, does he get bored of them? Get another and that's it. If you think about it that way I think it makes more sense, I tried at all costs to avoid sexual topics in this story.

Bow can also age, I'm sure of that, I'm not that stupid, but we are talking about someone superficial and not only that, Bow looks like someone who is robust and fit, I guess mares like that kind of Stallions a lot, right? regardless of age.

New notes in the story always add interest

Honestly you could always make it so Bow passes away to avoid having to make a reason for why they broke up. It could even be a long time after he passed so the period of morning is up and being with a stallion just reminds her too much of what she lost

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That's a very good suggestion, I could use it in another story, but unfortunately it wouldn't fit here, I mean, my purpose was to give a backstory to the characters, both Windy and Autumn, I've seen in yuri animes, which I almost never know it gives a background to the main characters, it's up to the reader to see it as something good or bad, but I prefer to do the first thing I mention, give them a background first before they meet, and what better way than Bow cheating Windy for years and add a good drama.

I wonder if Windy could actually do what she was saying like she was an alicorn in Pegasus clothing now I get she was saying all that out of anger but it still sounds pretty badass to me.

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No, Windy didn't mean it, she was consumed by anger, which led her to say those things, she was trying to make Bow feel bad, telling him that he's like some kind of virus and she's an omnipotent being that can "defeat him" with a single flutter.

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