I have made some changes to this story, which seems to have been abandoned, but that is not the case; I am simply interested in continuing other stories.

These are the changes I added.

Grammatical fixes.
More vivid descriptions and emotions.
Punctuation fixes.
Spelling fixes.
Run-on fixes.

Comments from my most recent story to date, have told me that the reasons why Bow left Windy were "Absurd" it may be true, but it was a misunderstanding and I had my reasons for why I had put it. I just didn't want the story to contain sexual themes, this time I corrected it and only the word "Cheating" is mentioned in it, I think it was enough to keep the E rating.

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