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Forward Slash


"Yeah? Well, y'know, that's just like, uh... Your opinion, man." - Jeff Letrotski

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Ever wanted to see how you would do in the wonderful world of Canterlot High? Well, you're in the wrong place. This is Earth - sorry to break this horrible news to you. However, if you want to READ about how you would fair in such a place, this is it!

This will probably be quite long and drawn out, so I would appreciate it if you can bare with me for a little while to get into the meat of it. I promise it might get good.

As I'm sure is evident, a lot of my inspiration came from CatagoricalGrants' various romantic CYOAs, so if he ever sees this:

Thanks, dude. You really helped me out, both in the past and now. Hope you're doing well bud.

Also, this is essentially the cherry-popping of my fanfiction career, so keep that in mind as you hurl grammatical errors at me left, right and centre.

Regardless, have fun.

Chapters (24)
Comments ( 27 )

Sounds like me when I wake up.

Looks like sleeping in wasn’t the best choice.

Nice. I play guitar.

Thanks Grandma

Honestly, sounds like something I would wear, but with different colors.

Sweet Family

Aww. I was hoping it was sunset.

I would’ve thought one of the rainbooms would step in.

Look at that. An adult doing their job.

Honestly, screw the teachers.

Glad it doesn’t look bad.

This will be fun.

This has been a decent story so far, especially considering it's your first. The pacing is good, mostly due to the format keeping it engaging, and the prose is easy to follow. I will say that the story doesn't go far enough to really hook me yet. I can see you've got some plans based on those tags, but unless I just took the wrong path, I didn't see any hints of that stuff yet. As it is now, it feels a bit generic.

P.S. Why does Cheese Sandwich not play the accordion?

Glad to be reading this again.

Getting good so far.

Can’t tell which one I like more.

How did they forget about the door?

Looks like not much changed.

Haha! it is me, the one

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