• Member Since 23rd Dec, 2011
  • offline last seen Mar 3rd, 2012

Firestar


Comments ( 11 )

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

WOAH WHAT IS IT?!?

I like this story so far, although I think I will wait for a another chapter or 2 before I rate

:rainbowkiss:I'm glad everyone likes it so far. I really didn't know what to expect. It really drives me to keep going. Thanks guys.:pinkiehappy:

Interesting. :moustache: Continue...?

Definitely continue!

I demand *khm* MOOAAARRR!!!!!!
:twilightsmile:

The Herd demands more.

This could be fun. Chapter 2 is a bit awkward, you need to whip on your editor/proofreader a bit more. I think it can be cleaned up. I hope you don't lose interest half way, sometimes continuing past where you intended can be a struggle. I think this has some potential (though it's still pretty early).

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