Scootaloo wants to spend more time with her friend, but is the deal she makes really worth it?
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ouch...i think this is the 10th time i've read scootaloo die and rainbow dash actually care,
oh well...
good story though
-Cough- Um... Wow...
Interesting concept, you had me going for a while... but the ending threw me. I bet a lot more would like it if you had some sort of redeeming ending. Like Scootaloo figuring out a way to win against whatever or whomever that was... or even the Mane Six banding together... Even Dash giving herself to save her #1 Fan would've been happier.
I can't see how someone would take their own eyes and speech for 'more time with their friends' but i suppose i'm not a emotional filly
Although, I cannot grasp the fact that Twilight would cave in so easily into MURDERING a child, even at Scootaloo's own consent. Though, if i had to make a valid conclusion, I would say that when Twilight read her mind, the 'angel' had somewhat infiltrated Twilight's mind, made her think irrationally.
aw man, another suicidal scoots? well at least this one had emotion.
good story by the way.
ouch...i think this is the tenth time ive read scootaloo commit suicide and rainbow dash actually care.
oh well...
nice story by the way
@SamFaith: The point of the end was to be sad, but with a little light to it. I didn't want it to be happy.
@Distrance: Scootaloo killed herself. Twilight just wrote the letter.
Glad everypony likes it so far!
Also, does anypony know why "The Creation Of Equine Rule" is, like, attached to my story?
o_o Dammit, you made my eyes leak. ;_; Made 'em leak all over the damned place.
Wow, I can't tell if I really like this, or really hate this... Screw it I'm giving you the thumbs up anyways.
Honestly... i dont like sad stories at all, but if its reasonable, ill put up with it... all scootaloo really did was stab herself... I mean, twi is an element of harmony.. she wouldve never gave up on poor scoots, and celestia would have an explanation or a theory, or an idea how to fix it... ruling equestria for thousands of years lets you learn this stuff... i highly suggest, if you wanna make it sad, make it so there is no other way... even though i would still not approve the sad ending... the scenario for suicide is still too.. stupid... im sorry but this is my opinion entirely... no offense intended, this is the worst story ive ever read on fimfiction.. mainly because the description and pic looked so great i thought i would read... if your one of those guys who likes sad stories, its a pretty good start if its your first one... but i, personally, wasnt sad at all... just aggrivated at the end... also how sweetie belle and apple bloom did nothing at all, never seeing death in their life... VERY inaccurate
That is certainly surreal. Lovely Scootacide story though.
I have this weird love of Scootabuse, so this made me smile.