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whitefang


Feb
4th
2012

Descending the Pit · 4:11am Feb 4th, 2012

I need somepony to give me some advice on my story.

Like certain areas I can improve on.

I really have no clue as to what I could do since i'm a novice writer but the story is setting there glaring at me to be changed, but i'm not sure what I could do to change it.



any advice is welcome.

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Thank you so much for the Fave of Shine!:twilightsmile:

Didn't know you had a story, now I feel yet another must be read!

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To be perfectly honest, I'm not actually "popular" at all....

Well, I don't think so anyways.

26314
Yes 3, it's hard to be as popular as you!:applecry:

But I have many aquatints who I have conversations with. But few I have on regular occasion, talk to.

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Lol.

And oh? Three people eh? :rainbowkiss:

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