• Published 27th Dec 2011
  • 841 Views, 11 Comments

Memory - Firestar



Twilight is losing her magic when a new creature appears in Equestria. What will happen?

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Comments ( 5 )

Interesting. :moustache: Continue...?

Definitely continue!

I demand *khm* MOOAAARRR!!!!!!
:twilightsmile:

The Herd demands more.

This could be fun. Chapter 2 is a bit awkward, you need to whip on your editor/proofreader a bit more. I think it can be cleaned up. I hope you don't lose interest half way, sometimes continuing past where you intended can be a struggle. I think this has some potential (though it's still pretty early).

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