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Thank you for the chapter, bit concerned about the whole child MC and sex tags though but otherwise looking forward to seeing where it goes, can't see celestial just abandoning her though.

Color me curious. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.

1 small note, nothing major. But I can't help but notice quite a few errors. If you're in need of an editor, I help edit as a hobby. Plus I do it for free.

Well that sounds interesting, we'll see where this goes

You have my interest, looking forward to what you have in store.

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I hope so. Fanfics are generally a little bit better than normal webnovels in that regard.

Many people come for either pure porn or pure story. A combine of those two didn't do well like its non-fanfics counterpart.

Normal nsfw webnovels have no choice but to included actual story, because they started from groundup.

This makes no sense. If he knows the show, why is he so scared? Why is he lying to Celestia? I get that dying and waking up as a filly would be traumatic, but that doesn't explain his thoughts or actions. Especially enough to jump out a damn window.

I see your concern, but the tags are there for future chapters. The character will grow up and I will address all the issues I have seen so far in later chapters thank you for your feedback

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What the fuck, sunbutt? Using a child as teaching material for twilight?

And romance..... please don't let it be spike.... or with twilight.... oh mercyful allah.

Thank you for the chapter.

I wonder how much magic silver shield will end up learning under twilight?

On the last paragraph I think there's an error, should it be trial instead of trivial?

This can be stretched out a few chapters, y'know?
I wanted to see actual interaction with CMC.

There is a typo red mean i think u mean red mane but other then that great ch ty

Yeah this last chapter was hard to read, you went from “week” in the first sentence to “month” later on.

Oops it was supposed to be month I’m gonna fix it so sorry

“Oof ow silver you need to watch where you’re going that hurt” little pips says as he gets up off of me. I simply sit there, staring. This is the first time that I ran into a cult Sure, I’ve seen them around in Ponyville, and even in class at school, but not like this.

A cult…? Children of Nightmare? Adaptus Machanicus? K-pop?

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