Thank you for the chapter, bit concerned about the whole child MC and sex tags though but otherwise looking forward to seeing where it goes, can't see celestial just abandoning her though.
Color me curious. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.
1 small note, nothing major. But I can't help but notice quite a few errors. If you're in need of an editor, I help edit as a hobby. Plus I do it for free.
This makes no sense. If he knows the show, why is he so scared? Why is he lying to Celestia? I get that dying and waking up as a filly would be traumatic, but that doesn't explain his thoughts or actions. Especially enough to jump out a damn window.
I see your concern, but the tags are there for future chapters. The character will grow up and I will address all the issues I have seen so far in later chapters thank you for your feedback
Thank you for the chapter, bit concerned about the whole child MC and sex tags though but otherwise looking forward to seeing where it goes, can't see celestial just abandoning her though.
Color me curious. I'm looking forward to seeing where this is going.
1 small note, nothing major. But I can't help but notice quite a few errors. If you're in need of an editor, I help edit as a hobby. Plus I do it for free.
Well that sounds interesting, we'll see where this goes
You have my interest, looking forward to what you have in store.
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I hope so. Fanfics are generally a little bit better than normal webnovels in that regard.
Many people come for either pure porn or pure story. A combine of those two didn't do well like its non-fanfics counterpart.
Normal nsfw webnovels have no choice but to included actual story, because they started from groundup.
This makes no sense. If he knows the show, why is he so scared? Why is he lying to Celestia? I get that dying and waking up as a filly would be traumatic, but that doesn't explain his thoughts or actions. Especially enough to jump out a damn window.
I see your concern, but the tags are there for future chapters. The character will grow up and I will address all the issues I have seen so far in later chapters thank you for your feedback