Canon x OC, that's my specialty, both in art and in MLP stories
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Glad I could help out with this story.
This was an interesting read
Well this was definitely interesting. It was good, but I think it could maybe have been slightly better. Your portrayal of Fleur seemed a little inconsistent, I wasn’t sure how you were trying to portray her, but I guess in a story like this it doesn’t really matter. Glad that Rarity had fun in the end with a nice guy who wouldn’t mistreat her, even if the actual sex scene felt a little lacking and rushed, no offence. Will we see what Fleur gets up to in the next chapter? Looking forward to it.
Where’s the cover art from?