• Member Since 24th Nov, 2013
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Duke of Canterlot


A CPA making his way in the corporate world.

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This is a very short story slightly inspired by "Velma" where a good female character is turned into an obnoxious jerk. But I decided to lay off the more adult themes in this one.

Essentially, this is an alternate universe where Twilight Sparkle lives in Ponyville but she is obnoxious and arrogant towards everyone she meets. However, the rest of the Mane Six is madly in love with her anyway.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 8 )

Glad you’re back! Hope to see more of your Starlight Glimmer stuff. I love how you write her ^^

This was a really nice little story. I love how Twilight atarts out arrogant (as you mentioned, a bit like Velma) but eventually mellows out and becomes more like the Twilight seen in FiM (and many FiM fanfics). I guess she can never truly overcome her own innate desire for companionship and friendship that led to her becoming the Princess of Friendship.

Hope to read more from you in the future!

11570446
Thank you! I actually do have another Starlight Glimmer story planned in the future.

11570559
Thank you so much! I do plan to write more stories in the future.

11570588
By any chance do you plan on revisiting your Final Stage story? Like I said, I love how you make Starlight evil. But of course, you’re the writer, it’s your choice. Just was curious ^^

11570606
I hit writer's block on that story some time ago but I had thought about how to continue it.
I'm trying to decide if I want to continue with the meth storyline or write something completely different showing Starlight's plan in action.

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Sorry to hear that. Well, regardless, can’t wait to see what you have planned in the future for her. Hoping you’ll still stick to her being evil. Very intriguing plot ^^

Best of luck to ya!

11570611
Thanks! I'm leaning towards starting another story where Starlight is pulling a "long con" on Twilight and her friends but a new story.

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