• Member Since 16th Jan, 2020
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Nagiman


Clop writer involving pretty much anal as my favortie topic, but enjoy writing other things as well. I do not Take Requests, Comissions are rare. This is my hobby in spare time.

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furaffinity.net/user/fanit/

Is that the entire URL?

Sexy and hot, (with the exception of the slight shit reference) but my major critique is this isn't really Twilight.

This slut could be anyone, as you didn't give her any of Twilight's personality. None of her mannerisms, none of her quirks, nothing that made the reader recognize her as the adorkable bookworm. Don't get me wrong, I LUUUUV me some Twislut action, but she needs to actually BE Twilight.

I understand the premise of this porn tale is she has to be the subpar student who will do anything for an 'A', but this still could have been accomplished with her personality intact.

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This is an Alternate Universe Twilight, Not standard Twilight and the reason why I used the Alt. Universe Tag in doing so. That's why it doesn't feel like Twilight as she normally would be.

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I removed the normal start of www. due to FIMFiction rules with NSFW links

Very nice!

My dick has been magick'd into diamonds. Nice story OP

That was so hot. I love Twilight being a dirty little schoolgirl. Fantastic work.

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Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Figure it would be a nice fitting for Twilight.

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Don't let Rarity see, she might try and cut it for the gemstone.

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Had to learn something useful from at least 1 book.

Like another user said, this Twilight is so different that she could be an entire different character.I understand that this is AU(in order for this to actually work), but I'd understood it more if it was...let's say even Rainbow Dash or any other background character...

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I know it could have been anyone else, but the only one that came to my mind was Twilight as she is one of my top characters that I like and haven't done a bunch of stories with. Rainbow Dash is a bit lower on my liked characters list but I think she'd do a bit better on trying to get onto a team by doing something like that. I understand that sometimes it's a bit more difficult to bend the reality of Canon even with AU which could have a different reality too. The real heart of it all though, was did you enjoy the story? Was it something that made you use your imagination so that you could put someone else there and not bat much of an eye as you turned the name of a character into another? If yes, then I think I did well to form something that you could insert someone else without much hassle and still enjoy the situation, just like a normal porno would be like.

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