After an attack on a night guard leaves the future of the Ponyville Museum in question, Spike must join the CMC to solve the mystery and end this threat! The threat of The Phantom Dragon!
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L Drkheart
A simple fan who is trying his best! Fair warning my stories tend to focus on everypony's favorite dragon!
L Drkheart
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aaaaaaaaaah, I see😏
https://youtu.be/cJ3LYVjanjw
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Yup! Love that song and if I ever think up another case I wanna use Scooby doo Where are you as the parody
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Hopefully everything can go back to normal after frickin VELMA
11503631
Here's hoping.
why Scootaloo specifically?
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Her name mostly but every one saying how much of chicken she is and how she is easily the one that is easiest to scare
11503636
ah
she's the bait
11503631
But recently we have seen the masterpiece Puss in Boots: The Last Wish 2
11503644
I still need to see that movie everyone says it's fantastic
Why them?????
You want a bunch of filly teenagers to go after a ghost.....and you are an adult doing that...
What the hell is wrong with you, go ask the princesses!!!
Yeah sure, just leave pony teenagers to do Royal Guards work without the older sisters and princesses knowing. Nice thinking
snarky.
Im more suspicious of Fine Line. Why is he against the museum?
wow. Rude
oh great
what is that suppose to mean?
?????
"My name is Fine Line and this is my sister Fine Line."
Mayor Mare said you were against it.
ppppphhhttt🤭
racism is a really odd reason to do this.
China town
?????????
woah, Language
what. WHAT
Just go to an Art museum!!
hey...
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You know, this is one of the rare moments when I wanted to be in the place of someone who will watch this cartoon for the first time. I would also like to set expectations very low in advance so that in the end, be even more surprised. If you watched the first cat, you will be surprised by the changes and I strongly advise you not to catch spoilers. But in general, the series is a bomb with jokes and deep meaning, pleasant viewing. And yet, it is advisable to watch in the original with subtitles if English is not your native language, the voice acting is the best.
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Ok. There is...room for improvements.
•The story just felt like it wasnt going anywhere and the characters were; MEH
The ending also just happened.
•Im not into the love triangle thing. Its just not needed
•The 4 were just thrown in to solve the problem without explanations.
Why aren't the Royal guards and princesses dealing with the situation!? Why did you choose random teenagers?
I understand the main mystery gang were teenagers but they never asked to solve crime.
• There are pointless arguements that mean nothing
• They dont hate and despise each other, but it feels like they dont get along.
•The main characters sounded rude and snarky even if it was teasing
•There's not really much comedy besides one.
•The logic of many things is just comfusing.
• The motive for the antaginest isn't really strong and doesn't make sense.
You are mad at the town so you'll blame the Apple family.
Why not just go to an Art museum?
• I don't understand the LIAR text if the reason was to protect art.
•The title is 'Whats new Scootaloo' but doesn't really focus on her.
Everything just felt not right.
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Would've been better if Scootaloo is the one who asked to solve the mystery and focused more on her.
The rests attentions the same as the other members of the original gang
That was a good story.
Can we have an animated series based on this instead of Velma?
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That would be funnier to see the four solving mysteries haha. I'm thinking of making another chapter but really really up my quality with a editor.
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I could offer my services if you like.
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Sure! I'm game for that. Just need to think of a mystery, get a cover made, and write it all out. I plan to write it all out this time. This story was made in a day or two and it showed. So next one will be better, that's the aim.
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Always aim for the clouds! Just keep in touch and I can help edit and preread your story.
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Sure! I'll have some ideas soon, just need to watch some shows or a movie or two.
This was fun, something lighthearted and enjoyable. The pairing of AB and Spike is always a welcomed plus. I hope you may do another one in the future.
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Once I have a better idea I will! It will be better heh