• Member Since 4th Mar, 2014
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draygan


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I like this

I wouldn't get your hopes too high Rainbow, not much of Applejack to fix at this point...

Another great work Draygan, short, simple, but oh so sweet:ajsmug:

I just love how reckless AJ and Rainbow can be, even outright stupid, with their competitiveness and Rainbow's pranks, and apparently Applejack's sexual interest in this case. Those two are nuts, especially Rainbow...and yes, that pun WAS intentional:pinkiehappy:

I also like the possibly pansexual Rainbow Dash, very fun little detail, considering her varied friends and fantasies!

Oh boy! This was really good writing! I had to split the reading in two because too sexy for me to handle in one go. Seriously thanks for writing this story! I love how you came up with a beginning and end from just the drawing. Felt very in character for Applejack and Rainbow Dash the whole way through. Plus lots of fun dialogue spliced through out. That's what I love to read in stories.

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