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Waiting on my 20s


Trying again.

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Century is your average Earth pony with his own interests and hobbies. An aspiring politician in love with history and classical music. Working as a political consultant for Mayor Mare of Ponyville.

But when returning home from one of Octavia’s performances, Century is approached by a strange, cosmic being that claims to be stronger than all other beings in the land. Looking for entertainment.

Equestria is in immense danger, it prophesied. In time, an unknown, wicked force is planning to attack and destroy the entire nation. Even the entire planet. Like a force of nature, nothing will be able to stop it. Unless it’s target, Princess Celestia’s crown, is stolen away and destroyed.

Fascinated with the coming attack, and eager to see the outcome, the being leaves the fate of the world to Century. But threatens to kill him if he dares tell anypony important.

With several seconds to midnight, Century must devise a plan to steal the beloved Princess’ crown, and find a way to destroy it.

Please leave a comment. All your thoughts and criticisms are important and valid to me.

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Chapters (10)
Comments ( 14 )

Pacing is fine for this chapter I think, though you may want to slow it down for the rest of the story. Seems like a great start to a story though!

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I feel my main problem is just filling up chapters with lengthy, substantial text instead of just dialogue. I'm looking forward to developing characters more, and it's not impossible. Here's hoping I get better.

Looks like they are getting there...

Comment posted by Waiting on my 20s deleted Feb 10th, 2023

Noooooo....a cliffhanger!

Century is approached by a strange, cosmic being that claims to be stronger than all other beings in the land.

Why would he trust Discord so readily?

Well that was an exciting chapter, it’ll be interesting to see what resistance they will meet when the arrive. Also, Daybreaker seems to be awakening.

Comment posted by ryanrobbie deleted January 15th

That was quite the chapter, sounds like Celestia is keeping equestria in quite the closed bubble, interesting.

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