All Is Jelly

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Wallflower Blush could not take it anymore. She chose this path and there would be no other way. Something unexpected comes that she does not see.

Written for Bahatumay for Jinglemas 2022

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quakeSanchez

quakeSanchez #1 · Jan 24th, 2023 · · ·

It was a five-inch clown shoe with a red clown nose on the toe part.

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the shotgun was filled with plenty of ammo

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the jelly was stifling to her voice. There was no escape as she tried to move her arms, to be contained by the sticky mass.

Last time I checked, you can stiffle someone's voice, not be stiffling to it. Also, you wrote this as if she wanted to be contained.

Wallflower Gush

Honestly, I dunno what to think about this. It's random alright. It's crazy and, ok, a little bit amusing.

It's also somewhat clunky, gross and dark. This story is trying to do a lot, but never commits to anything. Overall impression: what the hay was that?

Mockingbirb

Mockingbirb #2 · Jun 7th, 2023 · 1 · ·

Wallflower Blush could not take it anymore. She chose this path and there would be no other way. Something unexpected comes that she does not see.
Written for Bahatumay for Jinglemas 2022

I want to know what Bahatumay's request was.