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JeSuisLaPorte


T'as pas compris, laisse-moi t'expliquer. Je ferme pas la porte, c'est moi la porte! Je suis le gars des portes. Je porte la porte. Oui, j'ai un business de porte à porte.

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So TF2, and Elder Scrolls/Skyrim? Is their more crossovers?

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There will be more, mostly in the later chapters. Namely, an hommage to creepypastas, Half-Life and Killing Floor.

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I see World of Warcraft and Shovel Knight ( Or it's probably Minecraft? ) being involved here too. What else?

P.S. Who are the scalers? Are they your own OC Antagonistic Species creation? And then there is that "Abomination" cyborg.

They look like ripoffs of the Lizardmen, Kroot, or even the Orks from Warhammer Fantasy/Age of Sigmar/40K. No offense with the ripoff part.

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Nice on picking up the little Shovel Knight reference. Also yes, the scalers are my own OC's. Same goes for the "Abomination". However, I know next to nothing about Warhammer 40k, so any similarities between the scalers and the characters in that franchise are purely coincidental.

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Also, you didn't shy away of brutally killing several pony characters in here. ( Despite seeing the red tags myself. )

And making the Scalers feel comical in some things, but are still heartless monsters/conquers in the end. ( Just coincidentally like the WH40K/WH Fantasy/WH Age of Sigmar Orks personally wise. )

You have my interest for sure, keep up the good work.

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Thanks for the comment! I’m happy to know that I’ve piqued your interest.

“I do not think for a second that I will fail princess Celestia. I’ll... get Balgo to return her soul to her body.” said Twilight, desperately trying to hide any weakness in her voice. The figure did not respond and simply stared at her with pitiful eyes before returning to the shadows where it disappeared.
“None of this is of any use. We’re all doomed to fail eventually.” Twilight stayed there silent for a moment, trying to brush off those thoughts the impostor had confronted her with. The unicorn then resumed her slow and tedious mission as she struggled to climb the stairs leading out of the dungeon. Every step she climbed led to more pain as her back hooves would always hit the steps, causing intense pain to her broken bones. These moments of weakness would them lead to her magic nearly failing, causing Celestia’s limp body to momentarily fall down onto the cold stairs.

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I know what happened to her legs and flank. But what the f*** happened to her own mouth and eyes!!!??? Why do you put your own profile picture in here? :twilightoops: :rainbowhuh:

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Okay, what the actual F***!!!??? WHO and WHAT the heck is this Creepypasta/.EXE jerk that's mentality and emotionally torturing poor Twilight!?

The paladin lifted his sword once more to deliver the killing blow, but hesitated for a moment once the monster began to laugh. “Ha Ha Ha! Do you really think I haven’t prepared an emergency plan in case I would be losing? Once I hit the point of despair, my new ability will activate on its own.” Drag took a step back in fear of what was going to happen.

“A... And what is that new ability you speak of?” said a nervous looking Rarity.

“I’ve hit the point of despair! Time to make my getaway!” Devil Kong’s legs began to inflate much to the surprise of the trio. They kept on inflating until they’ve reached their limit, and exploded into a shower of blood, coating the trio in the demon’s bloodied bits. The resulting explosion launched Devil Kong far into the sky, effectively pulling him out of the battle entirely.

“What the hell was that?” responded Drag, horribly confused at that bizarre ending.

Seriously!? He not only got away, but he escape with some Loony Toon cartoon "magic" BS!?

“As if I’ll fight you alone. If you go down the path of evil once more; Pink, the Elements of Harmony and the princesses will oppose you alongside me. Those odds don’t seem as favorable now do they?”

I highly doubt that. Because one, don't you remember that Celestia is still frickin "dead"! ( I barely remember where Luna or Cadence are? ) And two, focused on the real threats of the Scalers over here! No friendly ally infighting.

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Nothing, this is just the appearance of the fake Twilight. Also, I originally drew this for this chapter, I've only used it as my profile picture because I didn't really have anything else to use beside it.

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That was a character I created when I was like, 10 years old if I'm correct. I'm pretty much using stuff from my childhood for this story, and seeing as Donkey Kong was my favorite video game character back then, of course I'd make an evil version of him. He's for sure going to stick around for a while as he's one of the stronger villains I've created for this story.

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Luna is still on the moon, recovering from her injury inflicted by Balgo. Cadance has yet to appear, I'm slowly figuring out where to place her in this story seeing as there is already a lot of characters to take in consideration.

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You called her/it "Bane"?

She/it doesn't look anything like a certain venom-infused super villain that once broke the bat.

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Well, i mostly used the word bane in its actual meaning, rather than it being a direct reference to Batman. Bane : A person or thing that ruins or spoils. I just really like that word honestly.

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Is that the purple guy on the left side?

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I think that's just the letter E you saw. But now that you mention it, it does kinda look like purple guy.

The cover art always gets me. Me and my dumb brain keeps mistaking it for nightmare foxy from fnaf peeking round a door. I think I need help:twilightoops:

This story takes place before the Canterlot Wedding's episodes.

Does this mean that the changelings won't appear in this story?

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They will appear in the story, though not for long.

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