This is a substantial rewrite of a story that I had published previously on FIMFiction.
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despite it being a little short (it isn't a bad thing after all), it's pretty good! i like how things are very well described (mainly how fluttershy feels about what's happening, it is perfectly written imo, irepresents her personality very well)
also, angel and spike were so cute
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Thank you for the feedback. I made the chapters short for a reason. Would you like to know why?
it's very interesting to see fluttershy meeting twilight and the others that way!
celestia was very cute here (even more than in the original series, at the beggining at least)
it was also really cute fluttershy's reaction crying and all lol
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Princess Celestia can be very cute sometimes.
flutter's relation to the other characters is so cute here! XD
i loved the applejack and pinkie apparitions, that hug was adorable
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Not apparitions; appearances.
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oh, sure i would!
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oh, english is not my native language so sometimes i can misspell something XD
thanks for correcting it
ooooh fluttershy's parents? that was very adorable :)
fluttershy cries a lot in that story (which is kinda adorable, making her even more shy), and it would be very interesting to see some kind of character development in it
also, i'm pretty curious to see how the relationship between fluttershy and discord will be like here!
oh, i loved it! other very cute chapter! i love so much the mane 6 friendship
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Don’t worry about Fluttershy; she will grow braver and bolder. It just takes her more time than it does most ponies.
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yeah, that makes her development even more interesting
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I know. Everypony pitched in to help throw a birthday party for Fluttershy that would please her.
oh that's very interesting! i loved to see things getting better between AJ and flutter
it was very cool that twilight wrote fluttershy's feelings
i loved it! fluttershy dancing was something pretty awesome
i also loved pinkie, AJ and rainbow's reactions to flutter dancing, and celestia being adorable as always
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Well, Fluttershy was the best choice for the butterfly ballet, since she’s the best Mane mare around animals and since her Cutie Mark is of three butterflies.
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yeah, she was the perfect choice!
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Do you like Fluttershy?
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i like her a lot! she and pinkie are my favorites of the mane 6
why are the ratings disabled?
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I only allow specific, nuanced critiques of my stories.
that's very awesome! i loved nightmare moon's reaction to fluttershy when she said "i love the night!" lol
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Fluttershy does have a point. The night is beautiful, and some animals, unlike ponies, don’t sleep through it.
oh, that's really good! that's a nice ending
i loved mainly rainbow dash and fluttershy reactions XD
that was a pretty nice story, congratulations!
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Thank you! The sequel is called My Little Pony: Free-Flying Friends!.