I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.
Ever since Hearths Warming Eve, Spike is acting distant around Twilight but Twilight can’t seem to figure out why so she tries to get Starlight to help her figure it out. The unicorn will be surprised to know what caused Spike’s discomfort and knows she’ll have to explain to Twilight the reason for it.
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Heck yeah, the one big sour note of an otherwise awesome holiday episode, glad to see it adressed here! Looking forward to Spike telling Twilight about her *bait* stunt!
Yeah spike is her assistant and despite the fact that it takes something big to get her to realize that the world does have other people who have feelings too she usually ends forgetting and since nobody is ever going actually hold her accountable for her behavior she usually shoves it away.
Small error but should be "Did anything notable happen between you two before her started going distant?"
But aside from that, interesting story. Can't wait until the next chapter
Great story so far! I would never have thought of the Spike bait thing made into a story. Can't wait to see your next chapter!
nice work
Hmm, interesting.
I think you made the right choice with a two-shot.
Starlight being helpful is always a nice thing too.
nice work
Nice. Glad to see it work out
Sweet ending there, glad that Spike told Twilight that it will take time to get over about what she did.
Nice! I'm glad everything's okay between them.
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Is it okay if you go a bit in depth about this story?
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Sorry, can you explain that?
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I meant can you explain why you liked it so much?
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I liked how you used the bait part from Best Gift Ever. I mean, I wouldn't have thought of that to be so emotional, but you made it so obvious, like it's right there. I also like how it took Starlight to interfere and help them move things along. I think the best part was when Starlight figured out why Spike was avoiding Twilight. Honestly, though, your whole story is great!