I am a big fan of Starlight Glimmer most of my stories center around her. I do crossovers as well.
This story is a sequel to In Her Corner
After Stygian reforms and is free from his state as the Pony Of Shadows, Twilight remembers that she made mistakes of her own with Starlight, she now must remind Starlight of how much she means to her.
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Glad they made up in the end
Good she finally learning that the things we say and do have impact on others especially those closest to us.
She couldn’t be too mad at Starswirl, he clearly had different beliefs due to being from a different timeline.
Disagree, he's an idiot.
AAAAnyway, the nightmare scene was excellent. If you'd dragged it out a bit longer you could've gotten some tears out of me. The brutality could've gone up to 11 and that would've created a devastating scene.
Once again I think this one could've been a bit longer and the impact could've been insane. As it stands, pretty good.
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How was Twilight here?
You didn't give her much, but I really disliked this line...
"Are you okay after yesterday? I know what me and Starswirl did hurt you and your little spiel about how you felt you would’ve been banished to limbo too really got me concerned.”
"Little spiel" really feels like Twilight is belittling Starlight. I'm pretty sure that wasn't your intention, but the choice of words leads me to that conclusion.
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It wasn’t meant to belittle her.
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I know lol.