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Scootaloo's parents are pretty much always away, and her aunts don't visit often. As a result, it comes down to her hometown to care for her far more often than not. Thankfully, the citizens of Ponyville are happy to do their part in caring for Scootaloo, all in their own unique and oftentimes crazy ways. Here's a collection of their misadventures, for whenever I feel like writing one.

I can't promise consistent updates (or updates at all) but I did want to practice some writing, and thought, "why not?" Just a few little one-shots I made up, I might make more later though. I do hope you enjoy, and constructive criticism is welcome. Thanks for reading!

Credit to Johnjoseco on creating the art used as a cover.
https://www.deviantart.com/johnjoseco/art/And-Then-Daring-Do-349247910

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Comments ( 13 )

I like the idea the others helping take care of her. I love the idea that Twilight giving her butterfly wings to help her fly, and as an alicorn she should be able to cast it pretty easily.

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Thank you very much! I'm glad you liked it.

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I always thought the idea of them all caring for her was a fascinating one. And yeah, I suppose if she could do it back as a unicorn, doing it as an alicorn should be pretty feasible.

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That's the emotion I was going for. Thanks! :rainbowlaugh:

"The Last Crusade" made it seem like Scootaloo was totally fine with being mostly raised by whatever local adults aren't busy. With ponies like these, that could be more plausible than one might think.

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For that matter, "Twilight Time" had Twilight helping Scootaloo develop her mechanical skills. No reason that couldn't extend to aeronautics.

…though some might claim Queen Chrysalis was hit by the train somewhere in Everfree Forest. If anybody cares about her after what she tried to do to Fluttershy in the Season 6 finale.

Nobody messes with Fluttershy and gets away with it.

Given the tags, this line feels like it'd be better suited for a Discord-centric chapter. That, or it's meant to be foreshadowing for a "Discord was the narrator all along" plot twist or something. I dunno. :P

Asides aside, this was a fun start! I look forward to seeing where else you take this.

While I love a good story of epic adventure, it is nice every now and then to have a story like this one that could easily be slipped into an episode and not look one bit out of place. Very well written, thanks for the story!

Really love the addition of the butterfly wings from Twilight. That was a very nice touch. :twilightsmile:

"If fighting is sure to result in victory, then you must fight." Sun Tzu said that. :twistnerd:

I like this story! Scootaloo running over all the villains was funny!

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