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Wow, that was just nonsense and terrible. Horror porn without plot, reason, or a resolved ending.
No one is in character, the story goes off the rails from the start, and it turns into a smut fest that is all about having sex while murdering every Apple in sight while ignoring the cause of all this.
There is just so much wrong about this, I have to say that at least the grammar is the only good thing to come from this.
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ass
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Eh. I didn't intend for it to be much more than bs dark porn. It was just inspired by a mix of a picture I saw and the last story I did. It just started and ended because it's all it was meant to really be was background thing to the original.
It's certainly not meant for anyone who isn't looking for exactly what this is. Which is why I ensured the fetish tags were in the short and long description. I totally understand that it's not quality and it's not much of a story what so ever. So, I totally understand where you're coming from on your complaints.
But in all fairness, I'm not sure what you expected from the tags.
I did edit the long description a lil so people expect less story though. So I do thank you for that outlook on it.
nice work
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Ignore that masochist. You write whatever the hell you want man, and if some fool reads it and possesses the stupidity to winge about the pain he inflicts upon himself then the opinion of that person is not to be taken with any weight whatsoever.
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Nah. All opinions are fine. I will keep writing whatever I want of course. Since, if I get an idea, I'll write it.
But his point of how little story there is, was true. Which was why I changed up the description a bit.
I just wish that if someone saw the tags and didn't want/bother to read it, they wouldn't rate it. But I fully understand that the vote system has always been abused that way. So, it's whatever.