join peter parker a former queens resident as his aunt and uncle move to the city of canterlot in order to better afford and take care of thier lives. what will happen as peter is bitten by a spider that grants him power and even builds up friendships/romances with girls from the school. this will be a starting out spiderman coming into his own and figuring out his powers. it will also be a harem fic with peter being with trixie, sugarcoat, and the dazzlings. it will have character redemptions and a spiderman trying to figure things out.
Chapters (19)
How is this Peter relationship with Rainbooms in this one
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this one is kinda not with the main seven. he will be kinda friends with them but the main members in his harem will be trixie, sugarcoat whose name i misremembered in the beginning, and the dazzlings post thier redemption. though if this story gets liked well enough then i cant say that i wont be able make another spiderman fanfic with him and the mane seven as harem instead of this pairing
I am a bit of a nitpicker but I just wanted to let you know that you didn’t capitalize. You also want to capitalize I if it is stand alone.
I have one complaint about Uncle Ben. I don’t think he would be complaining about people using masks or having secret identities. He was a big comic nerd himself and would understand why a person would hide their identity. He would definitely have an issue with Vulture because he wasn’t being responsible with what he has/ was given. His argument is something Jamison would have.
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i did not know that ben was a comics fan but i wanted to go my own way with uncle ben. the masks thing is supposed to add to peters dilemma when the thing happens as he wears masks and is proving to his uncle that a man in a mask can help those who cant help themselves.
An interesting choice in having it be Justin Hammer who helped create Spider-Man. He is the type of idiot who would skip on the safety stuff.
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thank you, it will make more sense in later chapters once spiderman gets more well known
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thank you for your advice. i appreciate the help. sorry for taking so long to reply
Wait, who is Moonsugar?
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i meant sugarcoat
All the people whose lives intersected with Ben’s is big, however I wonder if in the end it will be Peter’s life that will have been the most impactful?
Hey bro been reading this story for a while and I’m really enjoying it. Keep up the amazing work 🕷🕸
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thanks man. i think you were one of the first to add this story to your favourites and i have to say i appreciate it. thanks for the support
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No worries just keep doing what ur doing loving the story so far I
When I was 10 years old I saw the first time movie of spiderman and it is a very outstanding movie. I also all the movies and cartoons of spiderman on consumeratings. This page has a lot of series.
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i also love spiderman. he is my favorite superhero of all time. of course marvel has some bangers. i like the classics of course: Spiderman, Hulk, and wolverine are the ones everyone likes or at least they did when i was reading comic books. i also like obscure heroes like ghost rider and heracles along with thor. dc has some good ones too my favorites are the lantern corps all of them, i also like the flash as he is my favorite og justice league and who doesnt love amanda waller and her suicide squad... though the james gunn movie is the only good live action film adaptation.
This is what Peter needed. Hopefully he can get more of his fellow students to view him as a hero.
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glad to write more. trixie is such a great character. sure she is egotistical and gets in her own way but she is generally a good foil to twilight and i respect that
Good for you both.
Poor Peter just can’t catch a break. I hope the dance goes well, he deserves it.
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as another fimfic spiderman author would say... thats parker luck chuck
Dick move Vulture.
Well Peter you should’ve stayed at the dance.
Dude even though the chapters were short I still enjoyed this story to the point I might finish off my own mlp x spider man crossover anyways plz make a sequel
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the plan is to do one book for each of the movies except for the first one. plus an additional books based on either my favorite storylines of spiderman or just to introduce villians from both marvel and mlp
Good job on getting that break Peter!
I think the hero scene came to soon
"Here miss, if you or nephew need anything let me know." he handed aunt May a card and Peter took it.
Put "Your" in between Or and nephew
Go Spidey!