The filly is rather anomolus
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Im just a disabled lad in constant pain who sporadically writes
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interesting, reminds me of a canceled story with a similar concept.
Friendly advise, stuttering is best done with -, not commas
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Thanks
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you're welcome
This is an interesting concept.
I believe you should be able to have the image appear on the chat then having a link there. Interesting filly so far.
Speaking of commas, you should include them more often, not as stuttering, but to separate individual phrases in a sentence. For example, the phrase "You best eat the queen" is pretty strange to read out of nowhere. It takes a second to read further into the sentence and realize it should be read as "You best eat, the queen" instead.
nice to see this updated but you id the stutter with the comma agina
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I've edited it back to the - I think
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okay, just as heads up
First, I would like to say that you have an interesting story. I also would like to point out that routinely you misuse the word "changing" instead of changeLing.
Minor, as far as mistakes go
Monk
"You had a therapist once, and she made you stop coming after you told her about your childhood. Apparently she just didn’t need that kind of negativity in her life." -amphetanon
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What i use for writting keeps auto correcting chsngling abd i frequently dont cstch it
Don’t you mean anomalous?
great chapter and story so far
Still good and nice to see this updated