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I didn’t expect it to release that quick honestly, nonetheless I enjoyed it, and I look forwards to the next chapters, also I just wanted to make a random comment.
Completed story and suddenly sequel? Oh yes!
....something tells me that he doesn't create changelings...merely, outpaces them in the market. (After all, what biology can do, applied magic can do better)
Random question, is the cover art from like, dall e mini?
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I got both this stories cover art and the prequel's cover art from starryai
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Ah i see
I hope to see more of this because this is really good
great chapter
Seems like George is scarred, maybe it’ll attract suspision to Sugar Hoof if he were to visit
good chapter
Very sad, I hope he will fix it.
I wonder how this’ll get fixed, other than him just dying
Heh, I would have loved a sequel notice, but I still found it.
Thank you for writing.
Really needs to stop and think things through.
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Probably Alicornhood after some kind of breakthrough? He certainly has the connection, he is basically the core of the planet.
good chapter
He’s a Litch!
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false alarm, I gotta get out of the gutter with this story, but can't help but think them!
well seems celestia and luna are about to mess up. i wonder... since the planets core is now becoming linked to suger then would the magic go wild on his death or die with him? imagine luna kills him and end up dooming the world
Jeez, couldn't they just do the light thing and just, idk... injure/Incapacitate? Instead of kill and revive. I swear the grim stuff happens on purpose
I figured something like this would happen; Time to add that death tag officially, cause we got a war for the world, or possibly doomsday idk :P
ither way, we get a fight that will kill a lot of beings. Or elements do somethin, again idk :P Just speculating
Elements of Harmony versus a huge army of Treants and Knight, and pretty much a person to top it off, a Life magic and Shadow magic reincarnation who pretty much seems to be stronger and wiser than Celestia, Luna and the Mane 6, but who knows, the elements could defeat him, but it could be possible that barrier of life and shadow magic could make the elements of harmony pierce through, and even if it did, the Elements only respond with the cruelness in their hearts, or something, and not effect the foal cause he never intended fo be evil or something. I don’t know buf I’m liking this series so far
she is assuming alot there. He was also dying at the time so they could have been looking out for themselfs and left their dying vessel
good chapter
Glad to know you know water are you doing:D
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Water you doing making such a bad joke?
interesting chapter
Don’t worry I’ll never be stoned enough to make good jokes:D
Sugar might be incredibly smart, but god does he lack wisdom.
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he is a mage
good chapter
i wonder if twilight and the others are having issues. i mean the harmony magic would have effected suger hoof so its likely that the harmony magic was effected by him aswell
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Sugar Hoof knew he wasn’t supposed to have the Elements and Tree of Harmony, so he didn’t intend to be a bad guy, he never intended to kill or anything unless necessary I believe, but it could be possible that it changed him to be better, that also reminds me, Sugar Hoof didn’t mean to cause all the events that happened in the story, atleast not without reason, his heart isn’t what he is seen on the outside, so how would the Elements react once the Mane 6 use it on him, I’d think it’d remove the Shadowmancy magic atleast, but thats all, it wouldn’t remove him from learning od using it again.
This can only go well
Enjoying the story so far, heres my two cents if your intrested.
The quick updates and the direction of the story. I can never make a correct prediction and your choices are entertaining.
The background of Sugar i find is not really common amongst fics in my experience, and I always wonder about events or the world before.
Sugar has gone through alot of character change mainly becuase of magic influence, and can never tell if he's good or evil, or a shade of grey. Keeps me guessing what he will do, or what others will do.
good chapter
I feel like things escalated kind of quickly and a little too far. Don't get me wrong, the story is interesting and I'm curious where it's going. I'm still following. It just seems like the whole 'I have billions of thralls that basically own the planet' thing is a bit much. I think a lot of the themes you seem to be going for would work just as well with a few hundred thousand treants carving him a kingdom he didn't want under the badlands.
But, Maybe you have a plan for all that and the exceptional scale is necessary. I'll be interested in finding out.
Picked this back up again after a while away.
Just gotta say, this main character is a freaking monster.
He delights in torture and feels nothing when he kills those he decides deserve it.
the healing is not as rewarding as the hurting
I like how you had the order twisted to fit their crimes. Nice.
So now he has pushed the problem back for now. Look forward to seeing how this goes
the misunderstandings begins again
I thought this was finished-
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Back when I finished it, I was under a lot of pressure to get it done and over with, leading to that "rocks fall, everyone dies" ending. Now that I'm not really being pressured, I've decided to come back and finish it better. https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/1004709/i-got-my-account-back-so-for-sugar-hoof
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Huh, Neat
Oh shit! and there's a sequel? Score!
revising the ending?
I suppose the legion of doom, gets to react to him, i that's Grogar's bell