• Published 15th Jul 2022
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Honeybee - Dashie04



They met by chance.

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My Honeybee

Dear Rose;

I’m alive.

-Honeybee

NO RETURN ADDRESS

Author's Note:

So here’s my most recent story. Tried something new. You be the judge of how well it worked.

Same rules as A Little Louder, slurs will be deleted on sight, and if you’re debating, take it to DMs.

Don’t expect anything like this again, it was really, really hard to write.

Comments ( 7 )

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Some of the metaphors I pulled off here might’ve been a bit of a stretch, but that was one of those ‘story’s leading up to this’ lines. I was happy with that one.

This is such a powerful story. I can't think of anything to say about it except well done.

Very nicely done. Some folks tend to kinda go big with the drama, but this one uses the imagery to tell what is happening that we already know from when the word "religion" appears. I enjoyed this little trip, even though it was a sad one. And the song it's based on is a legit banger. Thanks for sharing.

Interesting story

Interesting factoid time. Honeybees really aren't necessary. They don't serve any purpose other than making honey. They were imported by weak Europeans to the new world because they didn't want to give up their sweets.

The whole honeybee population could be wiped out of existence and life would continue on without them. North America was green and blooming long before honeybees ever came across the ocean. And with all the pollinating insects still about it'll stay green and blooming long after they've gone extinct.

This story made me cry so hard. Honeybee was a song I once performed in front of my entire school, and when one of the members of SPG came out, it inspired me to do the same. Beautifully written, instant fave, follow, everything I can possibly do lmao

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This comment has touched me for reasons I cannot fully explain. All I can really say is thank you.

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