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Dashie04


"You might say I'm a dreamer, but I'm not the only one."- John Lennon (Dashie | she/her)

Comments ( 5 )

Great to see this published. The post-contest additions filled things in nicely. Looking forward to more like it.

What a sweet, poignant little story. I quite enjoyed reading it. I did notice one little error:

Why did they feel like they had to do this, usually. The unicorn never butted in, they were too scared, and didn’t want their parents to judge them like they judged them like they judged those ponies.

You accidentally repeated the bold words.

But overall, great job! :pinkiehappy:

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Ah, thanks, fixed now.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

"align with marelike things" What a wonderful and delicate way to describe gender questioning feelings! Very sweet story, and you've got to love some trans for trans romance! Thank you for sharing this here!

i liked this :D lots of good description work :>

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