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Withania
Ponyville Botanist by day. Wholesome vore writer by night.
Withania
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I hope this one doesn't suffer from flat characters...
Hmm, this kinda sounds like Pages of Harmony on drugs (assuming the original wasn't written on drugs).
This sounds silly. I'm down! Let's see how it goes from here.
Hm.. yeah. Sounds like Ponks.
Silly silly and a fun ending rebuke. Also there's an extra "g" in guards.
Silly romp!
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Okay Pozzo the Pangolin.
As a person that isn't into flattening, this just comes off as cute and funny. I like it!
You're right, there is a serious lack of flattening! Heck, there isn't even a flattening group on this site. Thank you for helping right this wrong, if only a little. <3
As for the story, tho. Other than few (3?) grammatical errors that I sadly didn't write down... It was good!
Bit of a pity you basically spoiled the ending with the cover/name and chapter names but maybe it's just me who likes going in blind.
Also while the chapters were different enough, mostly thanks to Rainbow barging in on With instead of the other way around again, it would've been nice to maybe have two Elements in one place and have some nice duo flattening or something.
Anyway. I'm not going to talk down quality flattening when they're so rare, so thank you and hopefully we'll get some more from you one day. ^^
Meh. Not my thing but I’ll like to be polite.
Also missed a chance to make a Myst reference with rainbow dash “ being ne the blue pages “ lo l
I expected that end