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TwiShine45


I write on here periodically. Twilight is still best pony overall, and Izzy & Sunny are best G5 ponies.

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This story is a sequel to MLP A New Generation 2: The Last of The Alicorns


Sunny, victorious over Luster Dawn, returns home to a hero's welcome. But, she's still concerned about her missing mother. Furthermore, her relationship with Hitch is heating up, and it appears they're heading for marriage. But, a dark cloud still hangs over Equestria, one that Sunny and her friends feel ready to face. However, it's gonna take more than just their friendship to save Equestria this time. It's gonna take the power...of dark-tinged rock and roll!

DISCLAIMER: All the lyrics in this story are parodical of the Swedish rock band Ghost and are written by me. Each successive "album" follows the band's discography, with each parody coming in the order of the tracks on each album. If you like the lyrics, then check out the band wherever you get your music!

Chapters (29)
Comments ( 59 )

This is pretty good and I'm giving you six stars for doing a good job on your new story. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

ITS HERE ITS FINALLY HERE I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS!!!!! AM READING AND UPVOTING INMEDIATELY!!!!!!!! :raritystarry:

Also, hope to see your upcoming chapters soon and remember: Never give up on what you really want to do. The person with big dreams is more powerful than the one with all the facts.

The continuation is nigh! It’s exciting to see another great story spreading its roots

Sunny is sounding like a true princess when she made a speech to everybody in Maretime Bay and I'm proud of her. Good job on your new chapter, TwiShine45. I'm thinking that Maretime Bay will be upgrade into a new and improve bay for everybody to enjoy. To improve is to change; to be perfect is to change often.

Now that I'm familiar with Ghost, I'm excited to see what this band brings to the story!

Golly! What a cliffhanger! I will agonize over the question of what barged into their camp all day, all night long until the next chapter is out. No pressure, of course! :D

I wonder who was that mysterious mare, I better wait and find out. Good job on your new chapter, TwiShine45, I really enjoy it.

Sunny met her mother for the first time. This new chapter is amazing I love it!

I didn't know this was possible but this is even better than the original!

Great parody song is sounded pretty catchy. Sunny will try to believe her. And this chapter is amazing, TwiShine45.

This new chapter is going great, I like it!

I hope Izzy gets at least some mention in the story. It doesn't seem right to have her left out of it completely

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Yeah, I don't want to leave her out. I'm trying to figure out how to incorporate her memory in some way.

Whoa, Izzy is communicated in Sunny's mind that's interesting and Hitch planning to marry her now that's adorable. This new chapter is amazing, TwiShine45 I enjoy it

“Yes, friends, as you may have guessed, the wicked group Scarlet Wing has declared war on our town. Their leader, a turncoat named Meadow Bloom, is possibly the most hateful pony in all Equestria. She turned herself against the ideals of friendship and helped bring a scourge upon this land. It was her predecessor, Luster Dawn, who secretly orchestrated our mistrust and unhappiness in the first place. Now, it is Meadow who threatens our happy way of life. We must rise up and defend our home! I’m calling on all able-bodied ponies to join the cause! We must fight for the future of Maretime Bay…and, indeed, of all Equestria!”

Spoken like a true princess, I'm proud of her.

I wonder who's gonna officiate Sunny's coronation

Wow, Sunny's coronation, I'll be willing how this will turn out. This new chapter is amazing, I like it!

Zipp and Quarter are getting along just fine. This new chapter going great, I like it!

Yeah, I know, Izzy said, but I’m also not really Izzy, remember? Oh, yeah…I keep forgetting that part. Look, Sunny, I know you want me back, but that simply can’t happen. You’ve got to stand on your own four hooves and tell the world that you’re ready for this. Sunny, you can do this. I know I may be you manifesting as me, but trust me, you can do it. All the confidence in the world means nothing without true friendships around…and you’ve got that, Sunny. Hitch, Zipp, and Pipp will be right by your side to guide you. But, they’ll be in Maretime! Sunny wailed internally. I’ll be in Canter-oh-Canter…Canter-blot, or whatever it is. I’ll be all alone! No, you won’t! Izzy snorted. Real friendships transcend land, sea, and air in order to make themselves known and this is no different. Do you honestly believe that those three will forget you? Have you forgotten the friendships you share? More importantly, have you forgotten that, recently, you and Hitch became a thing?! Sunny blushed as she thought of her handsome stallion. Okay, okay, I see your point. I do know the closeness we have and the bond we share…but, still. Even if they all move to Canter-whatever, I still might feel emotionally distant. I mean, I’m gonna be ruling the freakin’ country! Then, do things to settle yourself, Izzy’s calming voice came back. Find outlets for yourself and your friends. Go on dates with Hitch, go flying with Zipp, or write lyrics for songs with Pipp! You’ve always loved doing those things, and now you’ll have to rely on them to keep yourself close with your friends. Sunny took a deep breath. She knew that her Izzy-riddled consciousness was right. Her friends wouldn’t leave her. She’d never be abandoned. Plus, should her relationship with Hitch go any further, she was also beginning to have thoughts of a wedding. That would mean that he would become Prince of Equestria. Everything was beginning to move in a blur, one that Sunny was somewhat scared of. But, she knew that, with her friends beside her, she didn’t have anything to worry about.

Because the magic of friendship is by your side

Sunny going on a date with Hitch?! This should be interesting. I wonder how would this will turn out, I better wait and find out.

Izzy’s body remained in that wretched cave in what once was The Everfree Forest…rotting away to nothing, without even a proper burial.

Poor Izzy 😞

With the monarchy of Zephyr Heights dissolved and Bridlewood coming under Maretime’s umbrella, Sunny wielded absolute power.

One day, about a week before her coronation, she sat in her office in Maretime Bay City Hall. The mayor had gladly deposed herself before offering it to Sunny.

I don't really get why Haven and the mayor have to relinquish their roles just because Sunny is now the ruler of Equestria. I mean, even back when Celestia was on the throne, Cadance still ruled over the Crystal Empire

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Yeah, Equestrian politics are a bit weird to me. Why have four princesses (read: queens) when only two of them are actually doing any ruling? So, I'm changing it up a bit. Plus, I want to establish Sunny as the sole ruler of Equestria, so I'm having her lead Maretime for a while. When she's coronated, the mayor will most likely return to her duty.

This is amazing I like this parody song it sounds great!

The lyrics looks great!

Comment posted by LordFlareon deleted Oct 23rd, 2022

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It's Ghost's debut album, Opus Eponymous. If you listen to the album front to back, each song corresponds to one of my pony parodies.

A minor detail, but the drummer has different names in 2 chapters

Chapter 4

“Hey!” The group’s drummer, Rhythmic Chops, said defensively, “we’ve done…stuff.”

Chapter 11

“It is a time of trouble, that’s for sure,” said the band’s drummer, Skins Mare.

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Ah, thanks for the heads up! I'll go back and swap so they're the same.

“Good. Now, then, while you take care of those meddlesome musicians, I shall continue building our army. In a few days’ time, Sunny will be made ruler of all Equestria. It will be a day of rejoicing and endless festivities. Canterlot will be reopened, and she shall sit on its throne. However…amidst all that organized chaos…we will sneak in. Our little pony adversaries don’t know it, but Sunny’s coronation day will be her final one. She shall die…because I will remove her head.”

(Gasp) That can't be good.

This new chapter is going great, I like it!

I'll be thrill to see Sunny's coronation it's going to be amazing. Hitch kissed Sunny now that's adorable and this new chapter is great TwiShine45 I like it!

Comment posted by LordFlareon deleted Nov 15th, 2022

“I know, it’s sudden,” he said. “But, I can’t pull back any longer. Zipp, you’re the most amazing pony I’ve ever known, and that includes Twilight. While my affections for her were very special, I can’t hold onto them forever. Zipp…I love you.”

Aww, that's adorable.

Comment posted by TherealNightblader deleted Nov 21st, 2022
Comment posted by TherealNightblader deleted Nov 21st, 2022

That can't be good. And this new chapter is great, I like it!

“Yes, yes, yes, if death or destruction befell them, then they wouldn’t be a threat anymore,” Meadow said sarcastically. “There’s just one little problem: THEY HAVE ALICORN MAGIC INSIDE THEM! They can’t die…at least, not until that magic runs out. We can slice and dice all we want to, but the fact remains that they won’t perish. We could drain them of all their blood, we could chop off their heads, and they wouldn’t die. That’s how Alicorn magic works. Their gift from Celestia and Luna assures them longevity until…well, until Celestia knows when!”

“Queen Luster is dead now, Opaline!” Meadow snarled once more. “Her magic ran out! She was beaten so badly that her magic died along with her body. We’d have to do the same to Quarter or Mane or somepony essential to the band’s success. Sunny’s coronation is tomorrow. We don’t have time!”

I can't get my head around this part. First, Meadow says that alicorns - and alicorn magic-infused creatures - can't die no matter how badly they're harmed. But then it seems like she contradicts herself a moment later. What is her logic here?

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Basically, in this universe, an Alicorn's lifespan is tied to the magic lying within them. When that magic goes, so does the Alicorn. No matter what physical harm befalls said Alicorn, as long as the magic remains, then their lives will continue. Luster's magic dissipated in the wake of Sunny and her friends' attack.

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Ah, that makes sense. I can understand Luster's death better now.

I assume it was the same for Twilight when Luster killed her?

That really struck Sunny really bad

Damn. That’s quite the heart-wrencher

Looks like the cornation ceremony will have to wait and this new chapter is going great, I like it!

Comment posted by LordFlareon deleted Dec 24th, 2022

Opaline cackled. “YES! I have your mare, Quarter! Look up there, you petulant fool! LOOK! Do you see her? She’s bound, Quarter. She’s gagged. She’s covered with the wounds only I could inflict! Now…while I know you’d never jeopardize Equestria…I also know you’d never do anything to harm your beloved! Tell me the secret to Armored Hoof’s power, or I shall drop her from that ceiling onto the floor here!”

Oh, boy.

I hope Sunny will think of something soon and save equestria. This new chapter is going very good, I enjoyed it.

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