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TwiShine45


I write on here periodically. Twilight is still best pony overall, and Izzy & Sunny are best G5 ponies.

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Sunny's been an Alicorn for a few months, but can't seem to figure out her destiny. She's also been concerned over the disappearance of her long lost mother. Seeking answers, she and her friends head out to uncover the truth. The answer may just lead them to the very answer of why friendship left Equestria to begin with.

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I wonder if the violence and gore tags are just for the flashbacks, or if we'll see more of that in the future

Oh! You’re back! What happened to the old account?

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It was accidentally deleted.

I hope one day Sprout will change his mind and forgive Sunny; I feel sorry for her. Forgive your enemies, but never forget their names.

The four chapters that you just re-uploaded are awesome, TwiShine45, I like it! I'll be willing to see more of your re-upload chapters soon. Keep up the good work! Learning is the beginning of wealth. Learning is the beginning of health. Learning is the beginning of spirituality. Searching and learning is where the miracle process all begins.

Is Meadow related to fluttershy

Umm TwiShine45 I'm sure you finished this long ago. I read it with my own eyes. But then it disappeared. Are you the real TwiShine45? I also noticed that the number of your stories, followers, and EVERYTHING (almost) is different

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Yep! It's me! Long story short, my account was accidentally deleted, so I'm having to re-upload everything from my external hard drive. The only issue is that I don't have the last three chapters backed up. But, I've done my best to turn this negative into a positive, which means that there will now be a sequel! The final chapters will be the first three of the sequel, which will then focus on the aftermath and the existence of some new characters. Check the blog for more information.

So happy to be back!

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Oh, wow! So glad you're back! I was wondering what happened

In her eyes, the execution of those ponies was the right thing to do. Zipp might not have seen it that way, but Pipp did and, much like pop music superstars in the human world, she only cared for herself.

so THAT's why Pipp is written so unsympathetically...

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Remember their names both to love them and to be prepared if they attack.

Well, okay. I can't wait to read part 3, I'm so excited to read it!

How soon will the sequel come out?

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It'll probably be this Sunday.

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It's clear. I hope the story gets a decent ending. (I mean that the story will be well written and well finished).
And further. I read through a translator. And he could have misunderstood. Like the daughter of Flurry Hart took the side of the bad guys? I hope her motives will be revealed, because I do not believe that she just left. I also hope that Luster's wings and alicorn title will be taken away. After all, she's a fake alicorn. And she did not act honestly, assigning herself a title that she does not deserve.
And I was also rooting for a couple of Hitch and Zipp until the last. To me, they seem to be the best ship in the G5 right now. And I also think that Hitch has feelings for Sunny as an little sister. Hitch and Sunny are like Shining Armor and Twilight to me. But I don't mind your choice.

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Me: *Trying hard not to spoil the ending*

I hope Crystal Scales returns for the sequel

Ammmmm. Where is it?

when can we expect a new chapter?

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At some point today. I'll be writing it here in a few hours and then uploading it.

When to wait for ANG 3?

(Squeal excitedly) I can't wait to read ANG 3! IT'S GOING TO BE AWESOME!

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Probably next Sunday. I try and get these chapters out on a weekly basis.

Hmm...so we're ending on a more ominous note than it was originally. Gives me some idea of what to expect for the sequel

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Yeah, I wasn't completely satisfied with the way the original ended. So, I took this opportunity to change some stuff.

VERY anxious for the sequel!! ^^

“Friendship is the most powerful tool we have to fight evildoers like you!” Sunny barked.

“Oh, spare me your bloated sentiments,” Luster said, rolling her eyes. “My mentor, my so-called friends, and everypony I knew bowed to your idiotic ideals. Twilight said it would be worth it! She said it would take work, but that it would pay off! I worked and worked for years, but it never did me any good. No…friendship was the death of Equestria, and I am its rebirth!”

“I’d be on the throne,” Luster growled, “so who gives a hoof about anypony else? They only exist to do my bidding. They are my peons! True, some of them have given me valuable service, but I will not allow anypony to stand above me. I deserve power and a kingdom…the gifts Twilight never gave me!”

“You never deserved them!” Sunny thundered back. “You deserted Twilight’s teachings and formulated your own ideas. You turned your back on what it means to be a pony!”

“It was Twilight who turned her back on our kind, you blithering moron!” Luster spat. “She didn’t know what it was to be strong, so I made an example of her. Now, I’m gonna make an example of you!”

FRIENDSHIP IS WHAT KEPT EQUESTRIA ALIVE!
FRIENDSHIP IS WHAT BROUGHT US TOGETHER!!

FRIENDSHIP TAUGHT US TO BE LOYAL, HONEST, KIND, GENEROUS, HAPPY, COURAGEMENT

TRUST, FORGIVENESS AND LOVE! FRIENDSHIP BRING HAPPINESS AND HARMONY TO LIVES!
YOU KNOW NOTHING ABOUT FRIENDSHIP, AND NO MATTER HOW HARD YOU TRY FRIENDSHIP WILL ALWAYS WIN!!

Because friendship is

MAGIC!

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“Mark my words, Sunny Starscout,” Luster said, weakening as her body moved ever closer to death, “even if you defeat me today…another will rise. Scarlet Wing shall…never…be…ended…”

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so will FRIENDSHIP

“You pitiful fools,” Meadow growled. “Are you so determined on your mission of regression that you couldn’t even notice all of my faux clumsiness? Seriously, how could anypony actually be that awkward? I mean, I was stepping on every tree root, bashing every little rock with my hoof, and each time, we’d head off in the direction of my plight. It was in this way that I very carefully (and cleverly) led you right to Her Majesty’s doorstep. The Friendship Journal I gave you was gifted to me by Her Majesty in the hopes that we might dupe those who’d dare cross Scarlet Wing’s glorious distrust dust. Don’t you idiots know that it’s time to evolve beyond friendship…that the time of Luster Dawn has begun? Don’t you know that Twilight Sparkle’s teachings were lost to space and time eons ago? Nopony needs friends anymore! All you need is you. That’s what evolution and progression is. The strong survive while the weak are left to rot and die.”

THAT IS NOT TRUE!!!
WE ALL NEED EACH OTHER IN OUR LIVES!

See, in ancient Equestria, Alicornhood was the pinnacle. Life would have been grand for me if I were to have been made a Princess…a member of the royal pantheon! Ponies would have seen me more than through the prism that Twilight concocted around me. Sure, I was smart and I could memorize facts and figures without any difficulty. But I wanted more! I wanted to stand on the same dais and hold my head high just like my mentor! I would’ve been more than ‘the bookworm of Canterlot.’ Sure, my mentor once held a similar title, but then she found this thing called friendship…and it destroyed her!”

“How could friendship destroy anypony?” Izzy asked, eyes brimming with tears. “Friendship is the greatest attribute that anypony can have!”

IT DIDN'T DESTROY HER!
IT CHANGED HER LIFE FOR THE BETTER!!!

“Right. Now, then, where was I? Oh, yes! Me being Princess Twilight’s pet project. I felt miserable and alone, even when I was with my so-called friends. So, while visiting my mentor, I went digging around in the Canterlot Historical Archives one evening. I found some Friendship Journals that I swiped…but I also found something much more interesting. It was a journal that Twilight kept where she communicated with someone from another world.”

NOOO!!!


WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER!!!?

I ran her through five times with my horn, cackling as her blood pooled around my hooves. The final thing I whispered in her ear before she died was that I would rule Equestria one day, and since I was now granted an Alicorn’s lifespan, I had all the time in the world. She gasped, coughed up more crimson liquid, and died right there. I knew there was no turning back from this, so I gathered all my new agents, left a stamp of our presence in Twilight’s room, and ran off into the mountains. There, we created Distrust Dust and saw as Equestria descended into a delightful hell of betrayal and accusations. Once that particular pot boiled properly, the Dust was added…and all Tartarus broke loose.”

You MONSTER!!!

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