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Why isn't there a porn tag?
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Sorry, must of missed the tag! Added that now.
First sexy fic? This reads like you've written plenty.
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I've read my fair share of it, never really written it outside of a couple of Hollow Knight fics that no one really looks at because of the pairing.
So I have no idea if this is any good or not. But I do plan on finishing it since I've enjoyed making the worldbuilding for it.
You did pretty good for your first porn fic, man. Also, the set up reminds me a bit of the clocktower society storit.
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Clocktower Society was part of the inspiration, but the main idea for the fic started as a "what if heat cycles were a thing in pony society, and how would they deal with it?". Keeping it focused on the tour, the worldbuilding, and Floret helped with me being able to write without it coming off as awkward or clunky.
At least, I hope so anyway.
Huh. Well, this looks like a fun world-building exercise. I'll keep an eye on it.
Great start ^_^
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Thanks!
Any advice, further thoughts?
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Not much to elaborate on right now no. It's a good beginning and balance of clop and story. Can't really find any flaws and I don't know where you plan on going with this so I can't really offer any advice on progression. This seems like a "Willy Wonka's Factory" premise where the host shows around the guests so I'm assuming it's like "Cats" where it's a showcase of different methods. Which seems like a great idea.
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My main concern is that balance of story and clop. Somewhat worried that there's not enough sex in the sex-themed fic since the actual sex isn't really the main focus and more just in the background.
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Then the Porn tag should probably be removed as Porn suggests that the fic is all about the sex. You can leave the Sex tag and maybe Slice Of Life and Drama so readers won’t expect tons of sex.
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Read the comments, someone asked why the fic didn't have the porn tag lol.
I'll see how it goes, the porn tag is a tricky one on here because how much sex in a fic constitutes it as porn? And given the setting, I'll be keeping the tag just in case since what sex is in it might be more niche compared to what most expect, plus this thing got downvoted a lot before I added the porn tag...
So i guess anything with kinks equals porn regardless of the amount of actual sex in it.
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Porn = Big Booty Bangerz 56
Not Porn with lots of sex = Game Of Thrones
That’s how I see it
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lol, I'll keep the tag just to cover my arse.
Seriously though, didn't have the porn tag for two hours after posting and was getting nothing but downvotes, and as soon as I added that tag people actually liked it lol.
Cackling that the fact that you actually used my line.
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I credited you as well.
It's a good bit of dialogue why wouldn't I use it.
And I got to your author's note. XD
Also, Chitin is wonderful.
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Glad you like him!
This whole concept is really amazing, I’m gonna be reading every chapter of this that you make, it’s a real treat.
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I'm glad you like it! I honestly have no idea if this is good or not because this kind of fic is outside my usual expertise.
Working out the lore and worldbuilding for this has been fun though, and I've enjoyed being able to showcase things via Floret's point of view.