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What are the fetishes shown?
10940903
Updated the story description with material covered. I'll admit, nothing overly fetishy at this point, but the story is building towards a variety of things
This is heaven.
If these boys don't kiss, or at least rub their dicks together and say it's not gay before the end of it, my heart might break, though.
All the characters really shine and feel likeable and distinct, and extremely attractive. I'm really not often into such... positive sex experiences, but there's something magical about the tone you strike. Whisper's consistent playful embarassment and humiliation is really really hot even though it's very friendly and you can tell everypony cares about each other!!
The performers are given just enough detail to be idyllically attractive and tempting and exciting without being a distraction from our real cast, and, well. Just, good job, I'm hopeful for more soon. I wanna see this journey get messy in more ways than one.
10940999
Thank you so much for the kinds words and the glowing review, you made my day. I'm glad you liked it so much, and not to worry, I'll have more coming, hopefully soonish.
Really well written story so far, especially the scene with Heart and Whisper alone.
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
Oops, I think you got your cuck in my cuck.
This is still extremely hot and exciting. Heart's very good for these boys. We're absolutely getting to the point were all the drama is contrived from ponies being too dumb to hold reasonable and open conversation but that actually makes it way hotter so I'm into it. Impatient for next [week?] already!
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Okay, I'll admit, I laughed way to hard at that cuck comment
Glad it is still enjoyable for you, and no worries, the lack of communication is getting addressed just as soon as Whisper stops panicking. As for the next chapter, yeah, next week. I'm going to be working hard to stick to a Monday release schedule
I hope you continue this, I'm really enjoying it.
Very nice do please continue.
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I do plan to continue, work just got super crazy on me for a bit, and then I had some other story ideas come up that I have to address, but I'm not done with this one at all
Yay! He's back! And still obscenely super ultra cute!!
Whisper's great and his ability to get bullied by life by having too many nice things happen is amazing. Everyone's so positive I love ittttt
If Zerrina is pregnant with a zony and it's Whisper's, I'm gonna laugh. Good chapter.
Refound and reread this story, it’s real good and I hope it’s not dead, hope you plan on updating soon!
I really want more! This was very creative and sexy to boot!
I just wanted to say that I found this story recently, I love it, and I really hope to see more. I've always enjoyed seeing reserved, anxious characters pushed out of their comfort zone, and the way you've handled Whisper's conflicting emotions here is really fantastic.
I just finished reading your story and I absolutely love it
GAAAHHH!!! I CAN'T STAND IT! *twitch* 6 months and still no update*sniffles* my #1 of my top 3 stalled stories *pouty lip quiver* please, PLEASE don't let this story die! the scenery, the character development the emotional rollercoaster... so many things to love about this story! IT'S NOT GODSDAMN SMUT! IT'S TOO FANTASTIC!
seriously, i love this whole story line. i'm getting too emotionally invested in the characters. and the sex scenes are exactly what i would consider artisan. it blends in so well with the rest of the story. it's not rushed, it doesn't feel like my other two stories i read for the "plot". i rate this story up there with my non-sex favorites since the intimacy is compounded and enhanced by the physical not just an also-ran.
please, don't let this story wither on the vine. it's too good and has too much potential. your too good a writer.