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The Loner


The world of fantasy is where I feel at home, where I can write whatever I want and not feel judged by the world

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So far I am liking this

New story. Interesting on doing a biblical story.

After reading the first chapter:

I bet our own ponies ( That befriends our "Outcast" and former-Angel ) WON'T be too happy or pleased with God himself did to one of his sons for morally doing the RIGHT THING for stopping that satanic cult, and give hope to that little girl's spirit.

Wait wut?:rainbowhuh:
At beginning of the chapter Galadriel leaves a village whith two mares and one child. But! When he comes into a city, he comes alone?
Did I miss something?
So far great story.:twilightsmile:

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I probably should have put in there that he intended to go sooner, but with both of his foals being just born. He is going to leave them behind for now and go on a journey to avoid the estrus season and come back after a few months when he can teach the foals to get their own food (Wean them) and then leave the village and travel the world together with his family/herd. So yes, he does leave this village but arrives alone at another city.

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Probably should go back and read it a little more carefully, I'm sure that it is implied in the details. My eyes tend to skip lines once in awhile, so I find myself rereading it just to understand it lol.

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Yeah. Found it, must have missed it.
XD

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Humans can never interpret what He wants us to do because He never tells us directly as He used to.

We assume what He wants us to do and go from there. Sometimes we get it wrong because we truly don't know what tasks or actions He wants us to take.

Only those who have had near-death experiences, have died and came back or were prophets like Enoch, Job and Noah have seen God and spoken with him.

Nobody truly knows what God wants out of humans. Angels can't sin in The Bible as they don't have Free Will which is what allows us to make our own choices. You can thank Adam and Eve for that.

And yeah, they would be pissed off at God for maiming one of his children, regardless if they're human or an angel. I mean, God literally let Jesus be crucified and suffer, casting him out of Heaven temporarily as he carried all of Humanity's sins.

And as we know, God does not permit sin in Heaven. Hence why Jesus said, 'Father, why have you forsaken me!?" Because he was 'The Lamb' used as the sacrifice used for Humanity's salvation and redemption.

I have a feeling God will get a stern talking to for what he did. Hopefully Galadriel gets the curse undone and his wings healed and fixed up. If not, then this version of God is a masochist by allowing His child to suffer for merely intervening and trying to save a human's life.

Sorry all, but the next couple of chapters are gonna be chunky to read as they will be about his experiences in Tartarus until he returns to Equis. So it may take a little while to finish the chapter and resume the story!

My brain is going to hurt after finishing the next bulky chapter! Anyways, back to the grindstone I go...

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oh lol forgot it was there, planned something totally different for Galadriel and Persephone but went a different route.

I love your story Hope you keep going on and I give you a 10 out of 10

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