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Animalman57


Major Fluttercord and Appleshy fan, as well as a massive paleontology nerd.

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Twilight and her friends get tickets to see the theme park Jurassic World, and they are all super excited. Once they arrive, the park is everything they dreamed and more. However, when the latest attraction, the Indominus rex, escaped and cause carnage, now they must focus on surviving. Will they get off Isla Nublar intact?

A humanized My Little Pony and Jurassic World crossover made in anticipation for Jurassic World Dominion.

Contains Appleshy shipping and dinosaur carnage.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 6 )
jaw

Wow,l haven’t think of make the mlp and the Dinosaur together,it is a very interesting idea,I think you can write it continue.

I'd like to see an alternate scene where Masrani parachutes out the helicopter before it crashes into the aviary.

11165395
I don't think I'll do that. I was gonna keep the deaths in this movie mostly intact, so Masrani's gonna die, unfortunately.

11165571
well, I think it makes the story unique and I hate to see a character who is a close friend to one of the mane 6's parents die like that.

and I doubt many people would mind either.

maybe just write the scene of Masrani surviving privately and see if it works?

Could you separate the dialogues from the paragraphs?

I find it hard to read them.

11165923
I totally agree with you, I do hope the author does put spaces between the dialogues and the paragraphs.

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