Shadowblade93
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Oh this is good
Touching and perfect
Slow down, chief! You raced through this story, moving events and interactions along so fast that they ended almost before they began. This isn't even quite what I'd call a story, moreso a blisteringly brief summary of a collection of events. It needed more substance to sustain a narrative, and you unfortunately did not seem to be able to provide that. Even still, you earn points for a good ship that really hits on the types of things I like.
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