Written for https://www.fimfiction.net/user/315020/My+dearest for Jinglemas '21.
A story about Love and what it might mean to the characters of My Little Pony, and my first foray into writing fanfiction in general. Hope it's enjoyed.
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TheJackOfTales
A sick mind further poisoned by the internet. Pay him no mind, lest you are wrapped into his dark fantasy.
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Short and sweet, But i feel like there is missing something and i can't put my finger on what
I find it rather weird that Twilight of all ponies, who made it her MO and part of her identity to understand all minute details and facets of friendship wouldn't even differentiate between platonic and romantic love ... but in a ficlet of this length I can force myself to accept 'Twilight being Twilight' as a valid explanation. Her special brand of logic can result in unique conclusions at times.
Luna's confession is pretty sweet.
What I can't wrap my head around is the last part. Dreamscape Luna is a completely useless addition ... and Pinkie holding a "big book of jokes" in her hand? (ponyfication:zero efforts were made)
Is this whole thing just mockery? If it isn't then it still feels like there's a sharp cut after which you ran out of ideas and motivation.
Even as a big sucker for TwiLuna I have to give this an even bigger NOPE.
I'm loving this still story please keep going with it
Wait I'm sorry, WHAT!?