A kinky yet cute story!

It's not that bad, great job.

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Woo!
Thankies!

Delightful! The only jarring part for me is hearing Weird Al's voice for all of Cheese Sandwich's lines.

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Yeah. It was weird to write at times.

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I think that's what made the story good for me, I'm so used to listening to fan dubs, fan series, fanimations, and fanfic readings, plus rewatching the original show's material that I can just hear the voices as I read, and sometimes, I'll hear them as I write out my own stuff.

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I'm with you on that.

Even though it was a bit strange, hearing Weird Al's voice of Cheese as I wrote this made it more real and intimate.
Like...it's not really a sexy voice all the time, but you know it doesn't matter to Pinkie and that she enjoyed every second of it.

Just two ponies in love, really.

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Yup.

I'm glad this has been received pretty well, given how long we sat on it, lol....

Ok, given how long I slept on it.

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Hahaha it's fine
The time gave it a chance to age nicely

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WAS THAT A CHEESE PUN?!?!

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um...heh
no?

hahahaha

This was a very cute and hot story.

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oh thank you

I'm really glad you liked it

This was very good. It's nice to see some gentle loving bdsm.