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Ocellus and Smolder are a cute couple. Both have helped each other out like how Smolder's come out with her love for dresses and Ocellus's confidence getting better. However, things get a little rough when both girls accidentally ruin something that they've been looking forward to. This ends up causing a feud between them that puts their relationship in a tight spot.

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Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #1 · Dec 4th, 2021 · · · Heart Burns ·

“I’m fine,” the dragoness grumbled. “Thanks.” She just shoveled food in her mouth given the feeling that she didn’t want to talk to anyone. It was a bit of an awkward breakfast, though most assumed it was just them getting back into their routine.

I think she has p t s d which I don't blame her

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #2 · Dec 4th, 2021 · · · Heart Burns ·

Smolder clearly had something to hide but she was made sure that they wouldn’t be found out. “Well... What about you? You weren’t fully clear on why you’d be destroyed about becoming Chrysalis.”

Ohhh that's kind of a low blow but it's also another good question why did she been afraid to become like chrysalis but still yikes 😬

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #3 · Dec 4th, 2021 · 1 · · Heart Burns ·

“Who knows,” Silverstream responded. “Right now, I’m just looking for Ocellus, have you seen…” She passed as she looked to the window sill. There was a flower tray sitting there with three orange trees, with flowers that looked familiar to the hippogriff. “Hold on… where did you get those trees?”

Oh for the love of Celestia its those dang Dragon sneeze trees again stupid name but who the heck made those things and I'm surprised they didn't get rid of them after became allies with them

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #4 · Dec 4th, 2021 · · · Heart Burns ·

Ok relationship will not be too easy there always will be a bump in the road like having disagreements but sometimes in the end they just need to talk this thing out and hopefully they can work this out and poor Smolder they are really having a really bad PTSD about the event what just happened but she didn't want to admit it and basically holding all the emotion in anger in which That's not healthy Ocellus and the others try to help her but smolder just basically push them away and what makes things worse it looks like some other creatures accidentally plant one of those stupid Dragon sneeze trees which again who made them but I think that's what's causing her to feel even worse and the other dragons but it looks like she finally talked to her and explain about why she's been acting that way and she even got the chance to have tea party not just her but with her friends which that's awesome this was a pretty good story and I was kind of hoping if any of the kids will have any PTSD of that event but anyway this was pretty good keep up a good work guys

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