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A Night In Shining Armor's Mind

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Mix-up #1 · Oct 7th, 2021 · · ·

Awesome work dude keep it up

Darkentrophy #2 · Oct 8th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Pretty solid story! Good pacing, evocative descriptions, consistent grammar and punctuation, teasy dialogue at the end was nice. Did feel a little stilted in terms of flow at times, but it's not something the average reader would likely notice. Looking forward to seeing more from you~

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