• Member Since 31st Jul, 2018
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ClandestineWing


My name is Clan. Gomamon, musician, happens to like writing once in a while. Also doesn't bite.

Comments ( 2 )

Awesome work dude keep it up

Pretty solid story! Good pacing, evocative descriptions, consistent grammar and punctuation, teasy dialogue at the end was nice. Did feel a little stilted in terms of flow at times, but it's not something the average reader would likely notice. Looking forward to seeing more from you~

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