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GhostsandGhasties
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GhostsandGhasties
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Just read the first few paragraphs to get a feel for the story, that small error was the only thing that stuck out. I'll post my thoughts when I've sat down and read the story properly!
10974418
Oh, that one passed me by. Thanks for the help! Will fix it ASAP.
Unfair! I need my taxes done!
untill the 'lube not included' line in the script there i was like 'the poor fools dont know what there in for' then i read that and im like 'oh, nevermind these fillies knew exactly what they were signing up for.
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Only other spelling error I noticed.
This story is definitely up my alley. It's well structured and written, and I think you did a good job of introducing Peanut. Will definitely like and fav!
10974534
Thanks for the help again! I have no proof-reader, but I try to re-evaluate my writing at least twice before publishing. I'm still learning how to weed out errors, I hope they didn't take away from the experience.
hahahaha holy shit. This is the funniest line I think I’ve ever seen at the end of a story. NGL, I’d probably do the same thing.
This was nice story. Characterizations are good. The idea is super original and interesting.
I’m looking forward to the future chapters.
10974567
If you don't have an editor, send the chapter my way and I can spare a few minutes to do the weeding for you hehe
10975295
Wait what?
Oh wow, I wasn't expecting that. Foalcon on the front page!
Where's the hate mob?
The story premise kinda reminds me of the dark times when movie rental via mail was a thing.
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Dude. Really?
How low can you possibly go to imagine, let alone write this? Over here makin me sick.
10975626
Very funny, Lace.
10975904
Hope you had a good nut! And that you remembered to wash.
10975912
Well, I'm assumin you ain't know me, cause my homies know I ain't with that shit.
Would you show this to ya momma? Be honest.
10975925
Would you show your mom your Cadence clopfic collection?
We all have our weird tastes that we keep to ourselves, I'm just making porn that I enjoy and not causing any harm to anyone.
I respect your distaste for it though, just not the way you try to shame me for it.
10975935
It bothers me, man. And besides, it's been a long day.
Also:
I'd prolly eat a scorpion before I have that, but interesting insult.
10975555
Busy blogging about it and trying to rile up the masses, who apparently had figured out "don't like it, don't read it".
The Changelings are getting desperate I see.
10975947
People like you are the most annoying type of people. "I'm gonna go to the comment section to something I don't like and complain about something that's not only fictional, but also complain about and make an ass of myself by preaching the opinion that no one here is gonna want to hear", is what you're basically saying, it only gets worse when I bring up the fact that you have the free will to not view such material but you deliberately ignore that fact to complain about it regardless.
Personally I do ignore fics such as this (besides when I want to see what's trending atm only to click off a couple minutes later) but if other people enjoy it, whatever, it's all fiction. I have never, not once, understood anyone who could get so butt-hurt over words. As long as it stays contained in the world of fiction, your opinion in this corner of the internet is unwanted, annoying, and obsolete. So how about you do yourself and anyone in the future that you're gonna harass in a demeaning manner and ignore the things that bother you. It's a very simple task that everyone in the realm of reason can achieve.
10976452
Point. Imma head out.
10975904
Oh please, it's only low because society says it's low. And besides, we all know LavenderLance is telling the truth.
His boner has been resurrected.
Dude, fucking golden!
10974479
No refunds.
10975947
scorpion can be good if cooked right, so good on ya for wanting to eat some.
10975912
always
Pedo content being so likes. Okay now that’s disturbing
10976316
or maybe cozyglow is useing an illusion
10982393
You're not the first to say this, you won't be the last, and nobody needs to hear it anyway. If you don't like it, don't seek it out.
I love this. I've never heard it before and now it's gonna get added into my lexicon.
This one was good. Essentially a consensual non-con encounter. With a con.
Seeing it from Peanuts perspective is also cool. Her travelling life and all that.
I'm loving this story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Heh, confidence needs some strikes to keep it malleable.
My god that ending. WHAT THE HELL HAPPEN?
Was that filly really a changling in disguise and she transformed into some kind of beast and beat the ever living sh*t out that guy.
Or was she just a very strong filly?
10991324
I have no idea. I'm as confused as you
10991324
Author told me during editing that the filly is something akin to a mimic, except she ships herself to other creatures for food, i.e. sex, and the rope is her lifeline to the box, literally.
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It was my uncle who first told me that concrete joke. I was helping him re-pave his driveway when I got a nasty cut. After I did, he literally offered me a cup of concrete, and told me to drink it. When pressed as to why I would drink it, he said, "So you can harden the fuck up."
I'm paraphrasing, but meh
This explains how she can seal herself in the Box every time
10991386
It explains why she said "That hurt, mister. You should’ve been more careful when handling me." when he opened the box with the crowbar. From the way it was worded I was confused, as it sounded like she was never hit by the crowbar...
But if she's tied to the box, she feels what the box feels.
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Agreed. Society's morals are decided not by the largest group, but the loudest group.
Knew there was something up when she was so protective of the rope.
At least she was noble and didn't lethally harm.
Now we kinda want to see if eventually she can be convinced to settle down... 😇
Wow.
The turn this story took was so out of left field.
I was seriously not expecting a creature feature type scenario.
This was good. SO GOOD!
And now I want a sequel.
10999347
I loved that term. You don't mind if I steal it do you? Nah you don't.
10999474
Haha Nah. Go ahead.
I didn't come up with it. It's been around for a while to describe movies that featured some sort of monster. Sometimes the monster was just an exaggerated animal (giant snake or some such) and sometimes the monster was an actual monster, like what you have here.
And, seriously, if this was your plan from the beginning...bravo! I had absolutely no idea. It was an awesome twist.
10999609
My idea from the start was to just make a normal filly delivery fic, but, as with the majority of the things I write, it ended up turning into yet another strange filly. The opportunity grabbed me by the throat.
I plan on writing something extra with Packing Peanuts, I didn't feel like including more stuff since I felt like these short stories were everything I needed to finish her tale, but it won't be released until later. I have other stories I want to publish first before revisiting old ideas.
11000947
That's such a great way of putting that. I know exactly what you're talking about.
Yeah man..move on to the next thing while your subconscious works on Packing Peanuts. It'll come to you.
10976452
This exactly. Quick tip to help you out: FiMfic has advanced search tools, so you can put "-foalcon" in the search bar (without quotes) and you won't see it at all. But whether you see it or not, please stay out of our bubble and stop yucking our yum. Dead goose do not eat, dude.
That ending really caught my attention not I need to know what happened
Packing Peanuts will pack your fuckin nuts if you disobey the contract, she has business to attend...
My guess is that Peanut was Celestia in disguise.
Wow, this ending is really intriguing.
Gooood