annoying mortals bellow carry on with their lives

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Just read the first few paragraphs to get a feel for the story, that small error was the only thing that stuck out. I'll post my thoughts when I've sat down and read the story properly!

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Oh, that one passed me by. Thanks for the help! Will fix it ASAP.

Unfair! I need my taxes done!

untill the 'lube not included' line in the script there i was like 'the poor fools dont know what there in for' then i read that and im like 'oh, nevermind these fillies knew exactly what they were signing up for.

mouth while repeating on his head

*in

Only other spelling error I noticed.

This story is definitely up my alley. It's well structured and written, and I think you did a good job of introducing Peanut. Will definitely like and fav!

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Thanks for the help again! I have no proof-reader, but I try to re-evaluate my writing at least twice before publishing. I'm still learning how to weed out errors, I hope they didn't take away from the experience.

He masturbated the entire rest of the day, and missed the delivery pony who had his sofa with him.

hahahaha holy shit. This is the funniest line I think I’ve ever seen at the end of a story. NGL, I’d probably do the same thing.

This was nice story. Characterizations are good. The idea is super original and interesting.

I’m looking forward to the future chapters.

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If you don't have an editor, send the chapter my way and I can spare a few minutes to do the weeding for you hehe

10975295
Wait what?
Oh wow, I wasn't expecting that. Foalcon on the front page!
Where's the hate mob?

The story premise kinda reminds me of the dark times when movie rental via mail was a thing.

🤨

Dude. Really?

How low can you possibly go to imagine, let alone write this? Over here makin me sick.

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Very funny, Lace.

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Hope you had a good nut! And that you remembered to wash.

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Well, I'm assumin you ain't know me, cause my homies know I ain't with that shit.

Would you show this to ya momma? Be honest.

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Would you show your mom your Cadence clopfic collection?
We all have our weird tastes that we keep to ourselves, I'm just making porn that I enjoy and not causing any harm to anyone.
I respect your distaste for it though, just not the way you try to shame me for it.

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It bothers me, man. And besides, it's been a long day.

Also:

Would you show your mom your Cadence clopfic collection?

I'd prolly eat a scorpion before I have that, but interesting insult.

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Busy blogging about it and trying to rile up the masses, who apparently had figured out "don't like it, don't read it".

The Changelings are getting desperate I see.

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People like you are the most annoying type of people. "I'm gonna go to the comment section to something I don't like and complain about something that's not only fictional, but also complain about and make an ass of myself by preaching the opinion that no one here is gonna want to hear", is what you're basically saying, it only gets worse when I bring up the fact that you have the free will to not view such material but you deliberately ignore that fact to complain about it regardless.

Personally I do ignore fics such as this (besides when I want to see what's trending atm only to click off a couple minutes later) but if other people enjoy it, whatever, it's all fiction. I have never, not once, understood anyone who could get so butt-hurt over words. As long as it stays contained in the world of fiction, your opinion in this corner of the internet is unwanted, annoying, and obsolete. So how about you do yourself and anyone in the future that you're gonna harass in a demeaning manner and ignore the things that bother you. It's a very simple task that everyone in the realm of reason can achieve.

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Point. Imma head out.

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Oh please, it's only low because society says it's low. And besides, we all know LavenderLance is telling the truth.

His boner has been resurrected.

Dude, fucking golden!

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Agreed. Society's morals are decided not by the largest group, but the loudest group.

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This exactly. Quick tip to help you out: FiMfic has advanced search tools, so you can put "-foalcon" in the search bar (without quotes) and you won't see it at all. But whether you see it or not, please stay out of our bubble and stop yucking our yum. Dead goose do not eat, dude.