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PioneerofImagination


For as long as I can remember I've always had this powerful desire to make people laugh.

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The monster Witchcraft has ruled over the land in cruelty and tyranny for nearly 2 decades, and none have been able to stop him. But a young stallion may have found a way to do just that and sets out to do it on his 1st and perhaps last adventure.

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Comments ( 11 )

This is quite interesting! I like stories where "the world went to hell":pinkiecrazy: I'd like to know how bad life is for the inhabitants, how Witchcraft treats them. I don't know why I have the feeling that Twilight wasn't around when Witchcraft showed up, I don't know if it was because she died or something happened to her but she's not dead, from the way Miracle talks/thinks about her I think she died but not in a battle against Witchcraft, surely the others had a similar fate. Maybe you can clarify things for me as long as they are not spoilers for future chapters.:eeyup:

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This is quite interesting!

Thanks I wanted to make it short but at the same time it makes the reader ask a dozen questions.

I think she died but not in a battle against Witchcraft.

Well you're kind of right. But that's for me to know and for you to find out.

Maybe you can clarify things for me as long as they are not spoilers for future chapters.:eeyup:

That things will get clarified in the next chapter will I'm publishing either today, tonight, or tomorrow.

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Thanks I wanted to make it short but at the same time it makes the reader ask a dozen questions.

Looks like you made it!:eeyup:

But that's for me to know and for you to find out.

I'll be watching.:pinkiehappy:

That things will get clarified in the next chapter will I'm publishing either today, tonight, or tomorrow.

Wonderful!:yay:

I like what I've read so far. It's a great set-up for events leading up to the future and it shows great development for someone like Prince Blueblood.

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Thank you, tell your friends the more attention my stories get, the better.

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Sure and you're welcome.

The story has potential, but my critique is you need a proper editor to fix the writing as the dialogue is too fast-paced and rushed.

The way to save Equestria

IS WITH THE MAGIC OF FRIENDSHIP

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Did you read the whole chapter already? Wow that was fast.

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the dialogue is too fast-paced and rushed.

That's kinda of the idea. I wanted to have the prelude short but at the same time it makes you ask like 100 questions.

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