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PioneerofImagination


For as long as I can remember I've always had this powerful desire to make people laugh.

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Seeking to redeem himself Sprout, is sent to Canterlot —A.K.A. Zephyr Heights— to help set up a huge party that will take place in two days. Along the way he just might meet a new friend with rather inspiring talents, help ponies set aside their differences, and save the opening ceremony. And maybe the day.

A fun, wholesome story about forgiveness and redemption. It's never too late to say goodbye.

This story is my entry for the Generation 5 Bingo Writing Contest

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Sprout Cloverleaf had never been the most popular pony in his town, not even close. And after the fiasco he caused when he became the acting sheriff and made himself stallion in-chief he all but cemented himself as the least favorite pony. "Well I guess I'll have to think twice before I leave you in charge of things while I'm gone," Hitch Trailblazer told Sprout. "I'll probably be better off leaving the critters that follow me around all the time in charge. And speaking of which can you all please give me some space." The said critters then backed up but not by much or at all, but did so when Pitch gestured them to do so with his hoof.

Who's Pitch?

Might I recommend adding this to the writing contest bookshelf? It can be found here. :twilightsmile:

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I want an editor to look at it first.

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That was a typo, but I fixed it thanks for pointing it out.

This was pretty nice to read.

Pretty nice. That would have made a good conclusion for the movie or at least a short bonus episode.

"Of course it's up to us, Hitch. One of our own was the one that showed us the way and brought magic back, so if the rest of us work together and try to do what Sunny did, who knows what we'll be able to accomplish. Who knows, maybe I'll become a super unicorn too."

I don't think that's how it works Phyllis:facehoof:

Sprout got to work putting the Canterlogic supplies in place. Wth Star Song helping him, that cut the work time in half.

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Oh thanks.
Man no matter how many times I edited a story there's always a typo I miss.

Well this was a pretty nice story and seeing how Sprout can actually how about after his little stunt back in the movie can I did like a good Redemption story and he even made a friend named star song yes everything was kind of ups and downs especially three tribes are disagreeing with each other but good things sprouts defuse the argument and get everything in place it's really nice to see everybody getting along after all those years I'm sure Twilight and the others would be so proud of that this was a pretty good story keep up the good work

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I will I will, and hey I have others stories maybe you could give those a read as well.

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