Short and sweet.

It's actually pretty good and well descriptive for your first story.

Was expecting it as a pun but it wasn't. Still, it got a chuckle out of me so I'll leave a like and move on.

this was beyond awesome.

My listeners are going to love this

Pinkie must be as happy as the cat that get the cream

I know these are "blowjob" fics... but really should add a second chapter to each of them where Nonny gets to dip his wick in, for lack of another term coming to me, tight pony pussy. I apologize if that's too lewd.