A fun and interesting mind break story. Here's to Twilight rising up, overthrowing Chrysalis and supplanting her as the new queen of the swarm. May her brood be strong and her reign be eternal!

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Glad you liked it so much! That would certainly be an interesting story line if ever I end up doing an epilogue or a sequel.

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I probably won't be doing a sequel unless people really want it. Out of interest though, what do you mean by "Romance" sequel?

Ah, yes, My Chemical Romance.

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Oh no it was a good story i just saw the interesting possible plot ideas that came from what i read that's all. Sorry for the misunderstanding

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Don't worry about it, I didn't take offence to what you said and I'm glad you think this is a good story! Besides, your plot ideas were pretty good and would probably be what I would write if I decided to do a bonus chapter to this story that gave an alternative ending! Thank you for reading :)