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Mlp_Starry_Night


We're in this together, right?

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The three tribes have joined together and now live in peace. But there is still fear and worry in the hearts of the citizens as the unicorn wizards struggle to raise the sun and moon. It's up to two sisters to help their home. Are they ready for the responsibilities that come with their new role? Will they be able to create peace and harmony and help form their world into one where friendship is the most powerful magic of all? It will take time, but eventually, Equestria will enter a new age of harmony.

Please note: All events that happen in this story are based off how I interpret mlp's lore. Opinions and head canons may vary and that's okay, but please don't be disrespectful to others if you don't not agree with something.

Cover art made by me.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

A very nice beginning, I look forward to finding out what happens to king Cobalt and princess Platinum. Also a nice touch with the interaction between Stygian and Clover. I look forward to reading more.

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Thank you. Hopefully the next chapter will be out soon. :twilightsmile:

Interesting start! I would love to read more about this era!

Editorial note: A few of your early paragraphs repeat word for word. I believe there are two or three that repeat fairly close together. Here is one:

As Clover walked her eyes were fixed on the ornate crystal door that was coming closer with every step. She felt the growing uneasy in her stomach quadruple and had to fight the urge to turn right around and walk out of the hall altogether.

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I just realized that now that I've gone back and reread it. Thank you! I'll fix it right away.

Comment posted by Charcoal Flower deleted Jan 27th, 2021

I really enjoyed the first chapter, I really can't wait for more of the story

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