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Mellow Mare


Here to write memories!

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"Two young fillies embark on a perilous quest, venturing into some of the most treacherous landscapes imaginable. From blinding blizzards to shadowy underground caves, and over towering mountains, their journey is fraught with danger and excitement.

Their love and patience will be tested, yet through it all, their unbreakable sisterhood remains their guiding light.

Can they find the help they desperately need to save their home from the encroaching cold?''

Hello, I'm Mellow Mare! Welcome to this headcanon prequel of the show!
I always felt that Luna and Celestia lacked screentime, their story is beautiful and they deserve to have fanwork like mine!!

I do all of the artwork for covers and such, but once in a while a guest artist will make an appearance to do one of the covers!

Please sit back and enjoy ...

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 9 )

The children's book-esque presentation with illustrations almost elevates it on a whole other level :twilightsmile:
Interesting stuff! I appreciate the effort you put into this

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Thank you so much!! That project is my little pride right now and it warms my heart to get comments like yours!
I hope to see you around more often! :D

I will do all I can to keep it as genuine and true to the actual show!

Then shouldn’t there be no red tags, no dark tag, and shouldn’t it be rated E?

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I meant more lore-wise. As for the gore, it will be more like bruising, battle wounds.. nothing that would make you gag.

But Luna and Celestia is a tragic story as much as it is beautiful, so there will be some very dark moments for the characters.

Unlike what we see in the show, the time before they ascended was much more serious,dark and rough. Lots of deseases, wars, enemies,etc.

So yes,I do believe those tags are warranted due to them being potential trigger especially when it comes to mental illnesses (which I assume was not discussed properly back then)

This looks pretty cool! There are a few grammar mistakes here and there, but this is some good stuff you got here. You don't see many stories covering the history of the Alicorns, so I'm curious to see where this goes!

Don't be discouraged by the lack of interaction, this is a good story that is touching my heart. I will eagerly wait for updates.

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Thank you so much for giving it a go!! I truly appreciate the time you took for writing this comment, advice and compliments are always welcome!! :D

The first couple chpters are a little wonky and rpugh on the edges, but I swear it starts picking up after chapter 2. Thank you again, love. ♡
Looking forward to seeing you around!

This is looking so much better, and the story is starting to get interesting now. Can't wait to see where this goes!

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Thank you so much!! I am glad to see you again!
If you think it's starting to be interesting, just wait for the next chapter!!

Thank you again for the encouragements! :D

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