Coco Pommel balances being the daughter of Sly Cooper and a member of the Cooper Gang with not disappointing her Law Enforcement mother, Inspector Carmelita Fox.
After surviving a spell that merged Twilight and Dash into a single being, the two mares are still struggling to get back to as normal a life as they can have. Except, didn’t they used to have more friends? Why is it so hard to remember…
Twilight is getting used to being an alicorn, but there's still something she needs to get some help with. Fortunately, she knows just the pony to ask, and won't let nervousness hold her back any longer.
You've had your eyes set on Applejack for a long time. Maybe your best friend Rainbow Dash can help you earn Applejack's heart. You wouldn't see why not. Besides, she's your best bro. Right?
Two humans, after arriving in Equestria via car crash, have to survive in this magical world long enough to either make it home, or make a new life for themselves in this world of magical creatures.
A newcomer to the town of Ponyville, Wild Spirit lives day by day with his demons. Not sure of where his life is heading, he settles down hoping to start anew. Hopefully, new friends will help when the time comes when he will have to face himself.
Silver Star had never known that her life was going to be harder than her parents' ever were. All she knew were the stories that they liked to tell her. With this trip to Saddle Arabia, Silver’s innocence will be shattered.
When a human wakes up in a strange world, he can make enemies fairly quickly. And in Equestria, it is no different. But, without any memory of his past, must blindly follow the allies he makes in order to regain his memories.
no problem! I love helping any way I can, I know that not a lot of people do this but, more should. It helps anyone struggling with anything really. Fanfics or not.
Well, I hope you have a marvelous day/night whatever time it is 4 ya.
2531292 Wow. Now that is some feedback. Seriously though, i really appreciate you taking the time to write this out for me. I dont get a whole lot of feedback like this, and your last point is duly noted. I'll be in touch, and i hope you'll stick around for the story's upcoming chapters. (P.S. I'm an editor as well, and I'd be more than willing too give your stuff a read if you're interested. ) Catch you on the flip side! ~Psychic Smith
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Really loved the first chapter. Can't wait for more!
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no problem! I love helping any way I can, I know that not a lot of people do this but, more should. It helps anyone struggling with anything really. Fanfics or not.
Well, I hope you have a marvelous day/night whatever time it is 4 ya.
2531292
Wow. Now that is some feedback. Seriously though, i really appreciate you taking the time to write this out for me. I dont get a whole lot of feedback like this, and your last point is duly noted. I'll be in touch, and i hope you'll stick around for the story's upcoming chapters.
(P.S. I'm an editor as well, and I'd be more than willing too give your stuff a read if you're interested. )
Catch you on the flip side!
~Psychic Smith